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Next post: Hopefully Wednesday, but maybe Thursday. Will depend on how much writing I get done in the meantime. If Thursday, it'll be late afternoon or evening.

Preview Chapter 13
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Carol

ooooooooooooo juicy very juicy

Aahh, whoops. There goes Lois, without checking the water level again. Can't blame her, though. Guess she's not the only one shocked.

Yes! I knew Perry was going to show up here. And now that he knows The Other Secret he can keep those two honest.

Nice preview. Now we're getting somewhere (we hope). Is that HIM?

Lois has got to lose the lawyer, though. Unless it's Constance.

Looking forward to the rest.

Clark!!!

Yes!!!!! Oh Lois, you are digging your own grave here.

I love that it is her spilling the beans to Perry. Jealousy can be so powerful! I am glad though that it wasn't Linda hiding!

The preview looks good. Hopefull it's not just for an undercover story.

Looking forward to more,
Natascha

Great part and I love your preview. More of that!

Artemis

wonderful part! love it!!!

Delightful part. But I am worried. At some point Carol is going to revert to and there will be a train wreck.

Ah gaah. Clark is working with Linda? And Lois is sulking and won't tell him about Linda and herself.

But what is going to happen now that Perry knows that Lois and Clark are married and Lois is pregnant? Will Perry still think it is a good idea to have Linda on his staff?

Anyway, I loved that preview, HiM or no HiM!

Ann

Given that the "Queen of Evil" title is still up for grabs, why are we all assuming that the person snuggling up to Clark is Lois?

Nice revelation with Perry. I'm sure he was totally astounded, too.

And I don't like Linda either. She's a good bad-girl character to throw into the mix. She's pushy, she's arrogant, she's blond, she's - ugh. I think she's a better evil competitor than Mayson ever was. At least Mayson was competent and honest. Linda's a vulture.

I wonder how many parts we'll have to wait through before Lois asks Clark if he wants a divorce. You'd think that this is a pretty important piece of information, but she's never asked him. Of course, he's never asked her, either, so they're both being lunkheaded this time around.

I hope we don't have to wait until Thursday.

Ooh, that was soooooo good. Whoever said juicy summed it up for me!

Great, great part,
JD

Well, just catching up with this story, and it's been a fun ride. Keep up the good work!

Well I have been reading this story but unfortunately had absolutely no energy for feedback, sorry...

Great turn of events at the end! I hope that they now finally are able to get over the missunderstandings and talk to each other!

But wait, what am I saying...This is you we are talking about and we are only part 12. I am sure you have some more surprises for us!

Great story!

The benefits of travel: two parts at once!

I knew Perry was going to send Clark to the Star, but I didn't expect him to find out about L&C. He won't insist that Lois not know about the undercover mission now, will he? With a marriage and a baby on the way? It's not like in the show, where L&C had a known friendship that had to look broken to outside observers....

I just had a terrifying thought: What if Carol plans to stretch this misunderstanding out for the whole pregancy?! They don't have to fall *that* slowly, do they?

Fantastic part. Loved the revelation with Perry.

In the show, Linda never worked for the Planet. She went to Hollywood to film her life's story. Let's hope that's the same here!

Artemis

Oh, The Rival...I should expect these things, given that you're making your way through first season. But I didn't. Maybe we should start taking bets on which ep you're going to hit next.

I am hoping and betting on Clark and Perry in cahoots, and Lois has just gone and spilled all the beans...should get interesting from here!

Looking forward to more!
Amber

Thanks guys!

I did get the next chapter finished so I'll post sometime this afternoon - not sure if I have time before I have to go get kids...

A couple general comments - in the show, Linda ended up with a 'special contribution' to the article Lois and Clark wrote and then went off to Hollywood and was going to play Lois in the movie.

I still don't get why everyone thinks I'm evil /whine/.

Thanks again everyone!
Carol

Aww, not *everyone* thinks you're evil.

See?

Yay on the afternoon bit. Or, well, actually this probably still means I get to read it in the morning but I'll take it.

Edit: Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Michael

Wonderful part. Just wished I had read it in order.


Elisabeth

Ok, I'm very late with FDK, but just wanted to say I'm reading and enjoying.

This was way back in Part 10, but I loved it.

Having Lois meet Superman, knowing exactly who he was ... indeed being married to him ... was wonderful. And she handled it so well - had him named and everything.

Her 'How will I find you?' was far more apt than even she realised at the time.