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Again, thanks to Nancy, Michael, and Rel...

Posting next on Monday, either at around midnight or 7AM CST... depending on when I go to sleep.

TOC | Part 31

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Cat grinned at Clark. “Combining business with pleasure and taking your girlfriend home to meet the parents?”


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So Jimmy and Lucy are into bondage, huh?

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Jimmy’s eyes filled with awe. “Charlie King, I don’t believe I’m in the same room with *Charlie King*...”

CJ eyed the younger man warily.

Clark chuckled silently at his twin. <You have a devoted fan there, Jay.>

<Great...>
Poor CJ laugh

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Clark turned to her and her eyes went wide as she viewed his face. “Aymee, if there is *any* chance that we’re right your friends could *die*. Can you take that chance?”

Aymee swallowed. Lois and Lucy stared at Clark in shock.

<CJ?>

<What’s up, Lois?>

<Can you get in touch with Clark?>

<No, what’s happening?>

<I’ve never seen him like this before...>

<Last time he locked me out was when he was apparently facing off with Luthor after those tests...>

<I think Luthor should be worried... Can you see his face through me?>

<Holy...>

<My thoughts exactly, CJ...>
Clark's not happy, huh?

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I *loved* that it was poor Jimmy that ended up in the blue rope. And Lois's reaction
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Jimmy glared at them. "Are you going to let me go now?"

Aymee and Lucy looked at one another for a long moment.

"Naaaah."

Lois shrugged. "Suit yourselves, I'm going to have dinner with Rachel. The boys are out."
was perfect. dizzy

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Agree with all the above posters on Lois' unconscious motivations.

Good job in showing the psychology that underpins her beliefs. Sad, too.

I hope that with Clark, she can learn to reprogram her attitudes and think of herself in a different way (always extremely difficult).

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Michael: =P Bad.

Bob: I literally added that scene while I was posting >< It may still need to go in my word file... glad it was appreciated, =) And CJ was much better than ketchup, hm?

IolantheAlias: Happy to see a post, =)


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