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FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 20 #60258 01/25/09 06:16 AM
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OP Lieta Columnist L Joined: Jun 2008 Posts: 527 Texas	Again, thanks to Nancy, Michael, and Rel... Posting next on Wednesday, either at around midnight or 7AM CST... depending on when I go to sleep. TOC \| Part 20 Preview: Quote Cat sauntered over and ran a hand over Clark’s shoulders before whispering in his ear, “Morning, Hot Cakes...” Blame Michael for the preview! Sara "Lieta"

Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 20 #60259 01/25/09 07:06 AM
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Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,945 Likes: 28	Quote He took a deep breath. “I was stupid, Rach...” “True... but it was very human of you.” Talk about genetic defects Quote Clark stiffened suddenly, hearing several sirens. <CJ?> <Tied... Why does Lucy keep staring at me?> *SNORT* Clark looked at Lois. “My turn...” he smiled at Jimmy and rushed for the stairs. <She walked in on Lois and me kissing last night...> <And that is special how?> Yeah, about that... <I was in my Suit...> <Oh... Well, that... Clark! You have to be more careful!> Yep <Jimmy was there, too...> <You’re kidding?!> <Nope... Sorry, Jay...> LOL Clark grinned at his brother’s curses rang in his head as he took to the air. Now, now, now… Do you need another mouth wash, courtesy of Martha Kent? Michael /ducking because of preview/ Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 20 #60260 01/25/09 10:57 AM
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Lara Joelle Kent Kerth Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 2,292 Germany	Great chapter! Keep it coming! @Michael: Ducking doesn't help against these guys... The only known quantity that moves faster than light is the office grapevine. (from Nan's fabulous Home series)

Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 20 #60261 01/25/09 12:34 PM
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bobbart Top Banana Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 1,371 Likes: 1 Corvallis	You sure didn't waste any time getting this part rolling: Quote Lois raised a brow. “It doesn’t matter?” Rachel and CJ ignored her for a few moments as they silently comforted each other. Finally, CJ stepped away from his wife, “Lois, I don’t have to justify myself to you. You’re my brother’s girlfriend...” Lois, meet CJ's temper. And speaking of tempers... Quote “I went to face Luthor... and I got him to back down.” The others stared at Clark in shock. CJ recovered first and shook his head. “I always knew you would be dangerous if you ever lost your temper, Cal...” I'm definitely getting the feeling that your Clark has more... um... "spherical male reproductive organs" than the standard "show" Clark. I liked your handling of CJ. I was convinced that he was out of the hero business. But the Lucy AND Jimmy revelation. My only complaint is that you aren't writing fast enough. I want more faster! Bob

Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 20 #60262 01/25/09 04:27 PM
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OP Lieta Columnist L Joined: Jun 2008 Posts: 527 Texas	Michael: lol @ you for pasting from your beta file =P Lara: Glad you liked it... and the original preview had more context than that but Michael suggested I cut it off... Bob: Yes, well, Lois was being herself... nosy and pushy, ~.^ I'm also glad that I made CJ's decision plausible. And glad I caught people by surprise, hehe. And Bob, 'guts' is safe too =P Sara "Lieta"

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