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FDK: Twins 24 #17439 11/19/04 05:22 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 543 Canada G gerry OP Columnist
OP gerry Columnist G Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 543 Canada	Enjoyed this last section. I find it interesting the way you develop character and relationships. and what makes your stories such a pleasure to read. You're able to combine just enough B-plot in the story, mainly through interesting dialogue, while writing very strong A-plot. And speaking of A-plot, how can leave you Lois and Clark (and us), facing a .38 and being hauled away? gerry

Re: FDK: Twins 24 #17440 11/19/04 06:12 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 941 sunny California KathyM Features Writer
KathyM Features Writer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 941 sunny California	Ditto all of Gerry's comments, Nan. I've been feeling pretty relaxed here, thinking that the A-plot was winding up nicely, just assuming that Henderson would be able to take it up now and act against Lex. I don't know why it didn't even occur to me that Lex would have a few tricks left up his sleeve! Brava! Kathy "Our thoughts form the universe. They always matter." - Babylon 5

Re: FDK: Twins 24 #17441 11/19/04 06:51 AM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,384 Isle of Enchantment Vicki Top Banana
Vicki Top Banana Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,384 Isle of Enchantment	Ditto what Gerry said. I, too, love the way you write. Ditto what Kathy said. I was just bopping along, feeling groovy, watching everything fall into place, when BAM! That ending took me totally by surprise. Great story, Nan! - Vicki "Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster

Re: FDK: Twins 24 #17442 11/19/04 07:35 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. They are making progress. Luthor have spies in the police precinct. Quote "Miss Lane," he greeted them, "Mr. Kent. My master has directed me to bring you to him." He gestured toward the station wagon. "Get in please." When he said "Mr. Kent. My master has directed me to bring you to him." Is He taking Clark at gunpoint in front of Lois and leave Lois behind? He is kidnapping Clark? Its strange he is leave a witness or he did it on purpose? More ASAP, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK: Twins 24 #17443 11/19/04 12:23 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	Yeah! Whams! At least whams are coming... right? Tank (who has always loved Nan's ability to write tightly plotted stories, even if he does find Brian an annoying character)

Re: FDK: Twins 24 #17444 11/19/04 06:28 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Nan Another superb part! Tricia

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