Enjoyed this last section.

I find it interesting the way you develop character and relationships. and what makes your stories such a pleasure to read. You're able to combine just enough B-plot in the story, mainly through interesting dialogue, while writing very strong A-plot.

And speaking of A-plot, how can leave you Lois and Clark (and us), facing a .38 and being hauled away?

gerry

Ditto all of Gerry's comments, Nan. I've been feeling pretty relaxed here, thinking that the A-plot was winding up nicely, just assuming that Henderson would be able to take it up now and act against Lex.

I don't know why it didn't even occur to me that Lex would have a few tricks left up his sleeve!

Brava!

Kathy

Ditto what Gerry said. I, too, love the way you write.

Ditto what Kathy said. I was just bopping along, feeling groovy, watching everything fall into place, when BAM! That ending took me totally by surprise.

Great story, Nan!

- Vicki

Hi,

Great part. They are making progress.

Luthor have spies in the police precinct.


When he said "Mr. Kent. My master has directed me to bring you to him."
Is He taking Clark at gunpoint in front of Lois and leave Lois behind?

He is kidnapping Clark? Its strange he is leave a witness or he did it on purpose?

More ASAP, please.

MAF

Yeah! Whams!

At least whams are coming... right?

Tank (who has always loved Nan's ability to write tightly plotted stories, even if he does find Brian an annoying character)

Nan

Another superb part!

Tricia