"No," Clark had said, "I didn't know Elvis wanted to work at the Planet."
His breath caught, and he stared, despite how rude it seemed. For the barest of moments, her eyes locked on his, and the world spilled away. It was the first time in his life he had floated without leaving the ground. The voice, relentless in haunting him, was silent, and her thrumming heartbeat filled the void left in its wake. Exquisite.
AWHHH!!!
"This man didn't know to stand when a beautiful lady entered! The idea is just now processing through his thick cranium. Look and behold the Neanderthal..."
Hee hee!
Domineering, uncompromising, pig-headed... It seemed she was all those things and more, but also...
"Brilliant." Clark sighed.
This part still gets me...don't know whether to
or
.
Just had to pull those parts out, Diane. You know already that this part is one of my favorites.
Sara
You're in trouble!!! 
