FDK: Waking a Miracle (03/??) - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

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This just keeps getting more and more interesting. I'm really looking forward to more.

Irene

Poor Clark!

You're in trouble!!!

Jose

This is so great Aria, I really like your twist on the pilot so far. All of Clark's feelings when he meets Lois for the first time were right on..

Poor Clark

he really is a mess, Trask has really screwed him up..I can't wait to read the backstory on that!

~Liz

Another great part! All of the first season stuff is being captured wonderfully. Can't wait for the next part!

Jen

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"No," Clark had said, "I didn't know Elvis wanted to work at the Planet."

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His breath caught, and he stared, despite how rude it seemed. For the barest of moments, her eyes locked on his, and the world spilled away. It was the first time in his life he had floated without leaving the ground. The voice, relentless in haunting him, was silent, and her thrumming heartbeat filled the void left in its wake. Exquisite.

AWHHH!!!

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"This man didn't know to stand when a beautiful lady entered! The idea is just now processing through his thick cranium. Look and behold the Neanderthal..."

Hee hee!

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Domineering, uncompromising, pig-headed... It seemed she was all those things and more, but also...

"Brilliant." Clark sighed.

This part still gets me...don't know whether to

or

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Just had to pull those parts out, Diane. You know already that this part is one of my favorites.

Sara

Hi,

Great part.

Nice. laura

Great Part!

Ingra

Diane

A great part!

Tricia