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#138549 03/08/06 07:32 AM
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hyper hyper hyper hyper

Go Dannar and Alan!! WOOT! WOOT!

I feel sorry for the little boy that may have seen his mother stunned. frown

But at least they are all together now.

However, the one comment...

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"Sounds like Miss Austell's been learnin' some self defense techniques," Mark said. "Guess I'm lucky she didn't have no grudge against me."
Oh, Mark, if you only knew what was to come...

James


“…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26.


Also read Nan's Terran Underground!
#138550 03/08/06 11:23 AM
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Figures she couldn't just walk into the shop and see Alan standing around peaceably. Nope, that would be too easy. She has to get assaulted a coupla more times... laugh But she got the ticket to Alan, and now maybe she can get the Underground recruitment speech.

Oh, and sooner or later she'll wonder why Alan is calling "Steve Lawson" Mark... wonder if he'll ask for his coat back?

PJ


"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

--Stardust, Caroline K
#138551 03/09/06 07:45 AM
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Alan found Julia! Finally! I'm really looking forward to Julia's reaction when she finds out it was Mark's coat she stole. Great work!

Jen


Wash: Everything looks good from here...Yes. Yes, this is a fertile land, and we will thrive. We will rule over all this land, and we will call it... "This Land." I think we should call it "your grave!" Ah, curse your sudden but inevitable betrayal! Ha ha HA! Mine is an evil laugh! Now die!
#138552 03/10/06 11:38 AM
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sorry to be late with feedback; had to hunt up password to log in with new computer.

Awesome job with this story. Truly enjoyed literally laughing out loud. Good stuff, great talent. Thank you for taking the time to share with us.

#138553 03/10/06 01:47 PM
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What a comedy of errors when Julia went to the import place! Heck, when the woman said the young man had been there, I knew she was lying so I was going, "Run, Julia!" Poor Emma, though. Being stunned isn't fun.

LOL at Alan blindly walking into the street and being stopped by Mark. For a second, I thought Alan had his hand on Mark's arm because he wasn't watching where he was going, but then I realized he was tapping into his power pack.


Sheila Harper
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