FDK: Once Upon a Time... there was WAFFy - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

First part: Too WAFFy!! (Laura must be proud of you

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Second part: Evil!! Just when I started believing you wouldn't twist this one, after all!

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

An evil WAFFy...

ROTFLOL!!!!!!!!

Omg! LOL!! Nice erica. I was wondering what you were up to.

Rach

I like the story if I read it is . . .

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In the middle of a storm, the secret was revealed and the mistakes forgiven. Sure there would be a better time for explanations and little fights, but the obvious was standing right there on the Centennial Park and everyone who passed by could see it – Lois and Clark were in love and nothing could stop them from being happy ever after.

THE END

This part was beautiful. Kissing. Happy revelations. Beautiful.

I'll admit, I am not a fan of the second part of the story. First, that wasn't the challenge! You just wanted to get out of writing WAFFy

. I really don't like self-insertion

-- sorry! Also, there are some factual errors. I despise history with every bone in my body -- especially when I was little. Also, my mom is a math teacher, and I've *always* loved math and always been good at it

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EDIT: Mary, she wasn't talking about you. My mom's name is Mary.

- Laura

Ah, well; I guess it's just literary liscence.

Good one, Erica!

EDIT: You're Mom is Mary too, eh? Ah. That explains it.

Hey guys,

Thanks for the comments.

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I really don't like self-insertion -- sorry! Also, there are some factual errors.

I'm sorry you feel this way, Laura, but I told you to read before I posted. It is not my fault that you didn't take the time to do so though I must admit I had the best intentions with it, and I am very disappointed that you didn't like it. I respect your opinion and promise it won't be done again.

The Waffy story had a good ending and i did exatly what i was told : a waffy story about Lois and Clark. It was 'literally' a story inside the story also following my personal style - to create twisted endings.

Again I am sorry it is not appreciated by everybody, but I won't change it anyway.

Only when and if I want too.

Thanks for all the comments - the good and the bad ones. I really like when people take the time to say that my story is great or that it sucks. Makes me feel really happy when you guys do it.

Other comments are always welcome.

MDL.

If you insist MDL I'll add my comments

Actually I didn't dislike the ending, sometimes it's nice reading how L&C story it's part of history and learning new things about fellows folcs (it's a pity Laura doesn't likes self-insertions

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MDL, now that you tried writing WAFFy, you could keep at it and perfection it (sp?)

Carolyn