Wow! Thank you, everyone! I certainly never expected this sort of feedback!
Sara, I would say I'm sorry that I beat you to this one... except that I'm not.
And even more so that you found watching some of the scenes useful. Yes, even before Lois walked into his life poor Alt-Clark didn't look too happy, did he?
The timeline of the story in this trailer is, of course, rather different from the story itself and so different from the other trailers I've done - the story starts with a switch, and it's not until later that we find out about Clark and Lana. Hope that didn't give away too much of the story up front! But it seemed the only way to tell the story.
Oh, and I'm glad the 'IT' bits and the Trask voice-over worked!
So, I hope that anyone who hasn't yet read this amazing, heart-rending, funny, dramatic story will
run to the Archive or Annesplace as soon as it's uploaded!
Thank you all again!!!
Wendy
(who refers to the Kryptonite-and-Lana scene as evidence for Lana's total and utter villainhood with no redeeming features whatsoever
)