Hi Beth!

That flashback of Jay's (and Kaylie's) mom was truly something. Jay really must have crawled up the walls when Ellie collapsed.

And I could so see the sweatshirt-Ellie

Looking forward to next Friday, Michael

Have I mentioned how much I still love this?

Carol

Aaaa… poor little Jay and Kaylie! How old were they at the time of their mother passing? I was guessing six because of the baby book comment. Blue and Red, lol, couldn’t be any other colors. I thought their mother would say her favorite color was yellow, but I liked the purple answer she gave them.

Ellie acted really crazy, when I read part seven, I thought that she had injected herself with kryptonite, or something. Like when Clark kissed Diana. But then Jay found the necklace I realized it would have been crazy, even for Ellie.

I liked Jay concerned about Ellie.

I was getting the same impression Ellie got. I don’t know if it was because of the double point of view, or just because you write Jay so cold and distant. But I was feeling like he was getting annoyed by their relationship problems.

I said it before, and I’ll say it again. Ellie needs to talk to her parents, not just with her aunt. When she talked to Clark on the previous part I was praying for her to tell him her problem, but she didn’t. Well, it seems like she can’t ignore the issue anymore, she has backed herself into a corner.

Anyway, very good part! I really want to know what happens next. I’m anxious for “the talk”, and Jay is going to be there. I wonder what Lois and Clark are going to think when a very nervous Ellie tells them that she and Jay have something important to tell them. I can even picture Lois flipping out “Oh, my God, you are pregnant, aren’t you?!”

It could be fun. I just can’t wait for next Friday.

Thanks for the comments guys!

I was a little insecure about posting it (ask my BRs), so I'm glad to hear that you liked it.

Thanks, Carol. Check your inbox.

Hopefully, you'll get to see a side of Jay that isn't so cold and distant in the near future. He has a lot of stuff kept inside him, but he's got to let that out if he wants to be happy.

Thanks everyone for the comments!

I did but am freaking out b/c I think I may have contracted a virus that is destroying my laptop so...

Will get back to you - but am looking forward to it!
Carol

Oh dear. The daft things we do in the name of love... :p

Looking forward to the next part, although if I were Ellie, I'd just want the floor to swallow me whole. Imagine telling your sex-addict family that it's too violent to jump in the sack.

JD