Something tells me that people are going to like where I left the story this time. But... one word of warning. Don't get too comfortable

Yes, I certainly liked the ending, but I'm definitely not planning on getting comfortable. This little he-man display of Clark's, hot as it may be, most likely will only do any good towards making Lois think he's a total scum-bag. Plus, considering what you said about this being of epic proportions in length, I figure much mayhem will occur before there's a real genuine kiss.

Love it!

You're evil. That's all it is.

And this is S1 Lois who is more likely to end up slapping Clark. And hope that she doesn't break her hand.

You are scaring me though. As Rona said - this is 'epic' which means it's going to be a while.

I'm glad they don't really believe the Jimmy/Lois speculation. Can't you just see it? Jimmy coming in... "Get your hands off my wife!!!" and trying to deck CK?!?! On the other hand - that might be kinda funny [except to Tank - unless Jimmy breaks his hand...].

You know I'm about to be unemployed, so a nice long ML fic in my inbox would give me something to do and help cheer me up .

Carol [hey - I'll try anything!]

torture. promise me a happy ending?

Heh, so glad Lois got to see Clark's chest in this reality since she obviously missed out on the towel scene in Pilot.

1. Evil spot. Pure eeeeviiiil.
2. I'm scared.

I'm thoroughly enjoying this story! When is the next part???

Why do I feel like this is the best we are going to see for Lois and Clark for a while.

Can't wait to find out what Clark did to Perry.

Nice place to end but it won't last...

Now... what makes you think there will ever be a genuine kiss?

The optimist in me is hoping that this is the start of that affair that I'm so wishing you will give them, but the realist in me fears the can of worms that this will most likely open.

ML, Clark snapping and *kissing* Lane!

I haven't read part 9 yet, need to get my own one up first, so please, don't tell me they are going to get down and dirty. Because then Lois is so going to end up pregnant.

And I suddenly remembered some thing you mentioned about thirties' gangsters. You *are* going to drag this out for at least two seasons, possibly all four, aren't you

Michael