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Posted By: coolgirl FDK : In The Game of Love 1/1 - 12/09/07 06:29 AM
Welcome back! And oh! Wow!

That was so sweet and such an original idea! An ILOVEYOU with scrabble! And *Lois* placing the tiles to reveal her innermost thoughts! (usually we see Clark doing something like that!)

Wonderful story... smile

Here's what I'm placing on the scrabble board : ILOVEDIT!
Posted By: Ank. K. S. Re: FDK : In The Game of Love 1/1 - 12/09/07 07:23 AM
Fantastic! dance
Posted By: MrsMosley Re: FDK : In The Game of Love 1/1 - 12/09/07 07:34 AM
Jessi, this is a wonderful story, a perfect fic to read first thing in the morning. Thank you for sharing!
Posted By: cp33 Re: FDK : In The Game of Love 1/1 - 12/09/07 12:49 PM
I love you with scrabble tiles very original. Thanks for sharing.
Posted By: lcfan4ever Re: FDK : In The Game of Love 1/1 - 12/09/07 01:48 PM
wonderful *sigh* clap
Posted By: Sheila Re: FDK : In The Game of Love 1/1 - 12/09/07 01:55 PM
<Sigh.> Such a sweet little story.

~Sheila
Posted By: Caroline Re: FDK : In The Game of Love 1/1 - 12/09/07 02:55 PM
Oh, Jessi, this was wonderful! smile1

Your Lois is just exactly perfect in this one. She's funny and vulnerable and a little daring, just the way I love her. You made her leap of faith at the end seem very natural and in-character, and I was holding my breath as Clark read those words.

Thank you for sharing this lovely story with us. I hope we'll see more stories from you soon smile .

Caroline
Posted By: LaraMoon Re: FDK : In The Game of Love 1/1 - 12/09/07 03:08 PM
Weeeeeeeeee! You posted!! laugh And see, see, I'm not the only one saying this is cute and fun and just wonderful!

I love the idea of spelling the words out on the scrabble board, it's just too adorable.

You realize that now that you've posted this, you're going to have to go and finish all the other WIPs you've shown me. ('cause yes, she has more!)

*hugs* and YAY! for finally putting the finishing touches to this wonderful, wonderful little story.
Posted By: Zoar3 Re: FDK : In The Game of Love 1/1 - 12/09/07 05:16 PM
Very sweet and I second the notion that is was great to read Lois doing something like this for Clark.

Mona
Posted By: Elisabeth Re: FDK : In The Game of Love 1/1 - 12/09/07 05:59 PM
What an awesome fic! Of course, I have always loved the board game aspect of their courtship, since it shows us so much of their personalities and their relationship But even though you picked a great topic and shaped a great plot, you did it with a masterful word choice that lets us all know that you did indeed labor over this. (Nobody but nobody puts out something with that much polish for a rough draft.) So thank you for all of the time and effort you put into this. You came up with the perfect way to end a Sunday evening.

Elisabeth
who is competitive enough that, if I were Clark, I probably would have kissed her and then only scored her for the word "love". All might be fair in the game of love, but Scrabble has rules.
Posted By: Mercy Re: FDK : In The Game of Love 1/1 - 12/09/07 08:22 PM
What a great story!! I love fics that show Lois and Clark as best friends. The easy friendship + sexual tension is what these two are best at! And you made Clark's reaction to Lois' confession just perfect. Wanting to hope, but not daring to. His heart almost breaking just as everything he's wanted is coming true. Ooo--wonderful scene.

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All might be fair in the game of love, but Scrabble has rules.
This cracked me up!
Posted By: Shadow Re: FDK : In The Game of Love 1/1 - 12/09/07 08:26 PM
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You realize that now that you've posted this, you're going to have to go and finish all the other WIPs you've shown me. ('cause yes, she has more!)
wildguy Ahem! Sounds like the cat is out of the bag. Where are the rest of these, then?

Anyway this story was perfect! It was the ultimate WAFF attack, and it was funny, and cute, and just dead-on. I loved the piercing opening just find out that they were playing cards LOL, and Lois getting lost in thought in the kitchen, and then her finally spelling out her feelings in Scrabble tiles.

JD
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK : In The Game of Love 1/1 - 12/09/07 09:21 PM
Aw so sweet! Adorable thanks. Laura
Posted By: princessanna Re: FDK : In The Game of Love 1/1 - 12/10/07 01:27 AM
This was just perfectly sweet and adorable, with enough of an 'aww!' factor to make me sigh and feel all warm and fuzzy inside after coming home from a grueling day at work.

Thank you! clap

~Anna.
Posted By: emmachabemma Re: FDK : In The Game of Love 1/1 - 12/10/07 09:07 PM
This was really cute! This story definately had me grinning away to myself laugh

Emmachabemma
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