Beth, I love the season 1 like banter going back and forth. A babbler and a superhero=perfection. How fast will their relationship continue to progress? Will it slow down? Could it even speed up? Tune in next part...

Don't worry, he has a genetic resistance and insensitivity training regarding babbel.

I do wonder, did his Dad not tel him about the damsel without the damseling and the flying man? On the other hand, we would have no further parts to read if they were to acknowledge love on first site AKA kryptonian bonding.

OK, so part 3 has now been up for a good hour, so were is part 4

Michael

They are *so* cute!

C'mon, post more!

PJ

There are two FDK threads going on for this part, so I'm going to post a reply for both of them on this thread which is the most recent one.

Woody, you wrote:

and gr8shadesofElvis wrote:
Thanks! I wanted it to feel like LnC, but with my own twists. Although the banter and a lot of the characterizations are similar, Jon and Kaylie have their own set of obstacles to overcome.

And Michael:


Ha ha! That made me chuckle.

gr8shadesofElvis:

Ah yes... Who needs choclate and flowers when you've got a nice shiny rock and a chemistry set?

As for if/when Kaylie will see Jon dressed normally...

I refuse to comment because then I'll be tempted to give too much away and spoil the surprise.

I'm so glad you guys are enjoying this fic! Thanks for all the positive FDK, it's always a good motivator to go write more!!

Awww!!

Bethy, I just adore this story!! The banter between them is priceless and so witty!!

Count me in as another fan!!!

MissyG

I am loving this story. The banter between Jon and Kaylie is great and the story is progressing very well. Now, I just want to know what Kaylie's "other" job is!

Beth, I am enthralled. I love the banter and the flashbacks, and that old lady who insisted on waiting for the "real thing" cracked me up! I'm looking forward to your next update.

Lisa