Thank you, everyone, for reading and reviewing this fic-- and for your patience in waiting for this fic to be finished! I appreciate it more than I can say.

Well, this has been a fun story. I didn't see it until just now.

I still feel a little sorry for Mayson. She wasn't nearly as bad as some people seem to think.

Oh, I just loved the ending. I'm a little too sleep-deprived to string together specific comments, but it's great to see this story finally finished! Very great rewrite.

jd

Very lovely re-write! I never liked how Lois ended up thinking that Clark would go away for a weekend with Mayson. That just seems so out of his character, so I really liked how everything ended up in your story.

I loved the revelation scene! For once, Clark was just as surprised as Lois when he blurted out his secret!

I just read this story for the first time today, and I'm very glad you were able to find the time to finish it!

I have to say that I totally forgot about this story, but now I'm glad to have picked it up again. It was a nice ending to a lovely story.

Well done!

Wow.. very lovely revelation story

Lovely story!!
Great ending

Sarah,

Sorry to take so long to read the 4th part - my RL intruded! This was a great episode re-write. I had really disliked the way The Eyes Have It had ended (really dislike Mayson *shudder* and her pursuit of Clark). And I loved your revelation in Part 1 - that was very funny, and so very Clark! It made me laugh.

Great fic. Thank you for sharing with us!

mmouse

Aww! I'm so glad you wrote this. The Eyes Have it's ending always bothered me too! I really wanted to find out how it would have went if she had known he was Superman. My favorite line was this:

It just seemed so true! I could totally see it. Thanks for posting! I haven't been around long enough to read this when you first posted, but I just read it all the way through. Great job!

Laura

hmmm paris for a date! why cant i have a clark kent/superman for a lover!! life is so unfair!