FDK The Kiss Off 6/6 - 04/17/07 11:21 AM
It seems somewhat poor to start a FDK thread for a story as good as this one with such poor FDK, but I couldn't let it sit feedback-less any longer.
That was a great story, you guys! It'd be hard to point out the best parts since it was all soooo good. But I must say I really liked this:
LOL!
Perfect way to end this story, going back to the car metaphor.
I hope this isn't the last story you two write together!!!
That was a great story, you guys! It'd be hard to point out the best parts since it was all soooo good. But I must say I really liked this:
Quote
Only now she knew precisely what he was searching for.
A new speechwriter, no doubt.
A new speechwriter, no doubt.
Quote
Lois grinned. "That's the way all love stories should end, don't you think?" Lois stomped down on the gas pedal and pealed out of the showroom through the open doors, heedless of the obstacles in their path. "With a really cool car."
I hope this isn't the last story you two write together!!!