FDK: The Destruction of Utopia - Part 11/11 (final) - 04/12/07 11:56 AM
So that’s it. That’s all. Hope I managed to keep all of you with me throughout this little romp. And that you’ve enjoyed learning how Lois ended up with Clark’s coffee and Clark ended up with Lois’ donut when they were going up in the elevator after their honeymoon 
The interesting part to me is that it never even occurred to me that this story answered the above question until after the story was finished and I started thinking about that little scene where Lois and Clark switch the coffee and donut back. But when the idea did come to me, I just couldn’t resist adding it and suddenly, it became the focal point of the entire story. Funny how writing goes sometimes, isn’t it? :rolleyes:
Oh, and I’m in awe of the way you guys seemed to figure out what was happening. At first, I thought Paul was going to get it. He seemed to be heading in that direction, and then he sort of veered off course. Then Queen of Capes came pretty close - suggesting that a neighbor had stolen Herb’s soul tracker and thought it was a calculator. Then Mervoparkite seemed to play with the idea that it was Herb’s fault. But Noetal was the first one to nail it right on the head with this comment:
Congrats, guys. I’m in awe. 
The interesting part to me is that it never even occurred to me that this story answered the above question until after the story was finished and I started thinking about that little scene where Lois and Clark switch the coffee and donut back. But when the idea did come to me, I just couldn’t resist adding it and suddenly, it became the focal point of the entire story. Funny how writing goes sometimes, isn’t it? :rolleyes:
Oh, and I’m in awe of the way you guys seemed to figure out what was happening. At first, I thought Paul was going to get it. He seemed to be heading in that direction, and then he sort of veered off course. Then Queen of Capes came pretty close - suggesting that a neighbor had stolen Herb’s soul tracker and thought it was a calculator. Then Mervoparkite seemed to play with the idea that it was Herb’s fault. But Noetal was the first one to nail it right on the head with this comment:
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Clearly, Herb is accidentally sending them jumping all over the place because he’s not paying attention to what he’s doing.
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And all the Utopian councilors look out the window to see a massive pentagonal pool with an S-Shield incribed on the bottom where the Headquarter's gardens used to be... 
