fdk: The Destuction of Utopia - Part 10 or final? - 04/11/07 02:36 PM
As I was going through this story last night in preparation for posting today, I reaalized this might be a good place to end this story. All I'd have to do would be to remove...
from the second to last section. And remove...
from the last section. Oh, of course, that would still leave some hope. So let's add this sentence to the end of the third to last section as well...
So what do you think? It would save you from having to read any more? And it would tie up this story nice and neat.
ML
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Before she could completely panic, she felt this world begin to fade around her.
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Before he could make that determination, the world began to fade around him.
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But before he could take a single step, a bullet ended Herb's life.
ML