No tomatoes, Superteen. I liked it!
The only piece of constructive criticism I have, is that you switched from past tense to present and then back to past. I think it reads better when it's all in the same tense.
Having said that, let's move on to all the wonderful things I liked about this:
"It's just that I've never really felt like this and I don't really know what to do about it. I don't know if I should just tell him how I feel or wait 'til he makes a move first. It's all so confusing."
"Tell me about it," Clark muttered so that Lois wouldn't hear him.
LOL - Yeah, I can just hear Clark saying that.
"Lois," Clark eyed her cautiously, "if you're in love with this guy then I don't really understand what I have to do with it. Or why you're *here* even. You should be with him tonight instead of being here telling me that you're in love with this guy."
Aww, poor Clark! I really felt for him here.
now I'm babbling in my head! I never even babble out loud much less in my head...