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Posted By: Tarkas Comments -- Imbalance Part 65 (or, Test Your Memory...) - 08/06/03 07:14 AM
Not quite in a coma, but definitely snoozing heavily... but there is still the occasional bout of wakefulness. laugh

So, a small, rather fluffy, but nonetheless interesting part this time, with the promise of meatier things to come... eventually. What do you all think?

Phil
Posted By: Karen Re: Comments -- Imbalance Part 65 (or, Test Your Memory...) - 08/06/03 07:53 AM
Well, it's about time you posted again! And now that we know you still have some story in you, we're gonna nag nag nag nag until you post the rest!

BTW, it wouldn't happen the be one of the songs currently in my head, would it? "One way, or another, I'm gonna get you, I'm gonna getya getya getya getya..." Not quite country/western, tho...
Posted By: ChiefPam Re: Comments -- Imbalance Part 65 (or, Test Your Memory...) - 08/06/03 08:47 AM
I just loved the way they had an almost physical need to touch each other smile And yet, they still haven't kissed! (At least, I don't think so laugh )

The song going through my head is different than yours, Karen, but it's only bits and pieces so I can't place it. I can see the music video, though; half of it is a conventional singer in front of a band thing, and the other half is a high tech video game kind of thing with the singer on a motorcycle being chased by a giant... which never made sense to me, since the song was about her getting the guy... and at the end, the motorcycle crashes through a wall into the studio with the band.

Anyone recognize that? It's bugging me now <g>

PJ
Posted By: Shadow Re: Comments -- Imbalance Part 65 (or, Test Your Memory...) - 08/06/03 10:50 AM
Well, I've only gotten up to part 13 so far, but I just wanted to comment that I'm loving every bit of this story...I can't put it down! If you hadn't posted 65 here, I probably wouldn't have found it, so thanks!

Jen hyper
Posted By: Laurach Re: Comments -- Imbalance Part 65 (or, Test Your Memory...) - 08/06/03 11:43 AM
Ok It is about time Phil! And it was a very touching segment. But I hope you post 66 much much sooner! Laura
Posted By: mariadferdez. Re: Comments -- Imbalance Part 65 (or, Test Your Memory...) - 08/06/03 03:11 PM
Hi,

Great part. drool


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For, in that moment, Lois knew that she'd been right: Clark Kent, alias Kal-El, alias Superman, man from another planet and another dimension, loved her, wanted her, needed her... as she had come to love, want and need him. It was an exhilarating prospect, and it was utterly terrifying at the same time; it was everything she had ever wanted in the way of a relationship, even as she had been convinced that it was impossible; and yet, there it-- he was. All she had to do was take the risk of loving him and letting herself be loved by him; and, in truth, she'd done half of that (the easy half?) already.
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Oh, and 10 points go to anyone who can identify the song Lois hums from the very few clues in the text...
blush Shania Twain's "From this Moment On"

Beautiful. drool

More soon, please.

MAF
Posted By: TriciaW Re: Comments -- Imbalance Part 65 (or, Test Your Memory...) - 08/07/03 03:17 AM
Phil

I'm glad that you're posting this again. smile1

A wonderful part! goofy Superbly written!

I'm looking forward to reading the next part.

Tricia cool
Posted By: Mister Data Re: Comments -- Imbalance Part 65 (or, Test Your Memory...) - 08/07/03 08:16 AM
smile1 Yes! smile1 hyper She really knows that he loves her!!!! dance

Was there anything else that we needed to finish with this story, cause in MHO you could wrap it up here.

James
Posted By: merry Re: Comments -- Imbalance Part 65 (or, Test Your Memory...) - 08/08/03 02:40 PM
Phil,
glad to see you posting again
and a very good part
now - ditto others
more soon - much sooner
merry
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