oh so cute the Lois and Clark thing. She in denial mode and he didn't let her go. It was so cute when she finally admitted the crush. Thank you, the part was great and I can't wait to read the next one.

I wonder what Lois and Mayson are up to and what happens with Lex.

I like the story very much, but this part made me take a serious pause in the story to go back an re-read things:

So, Clark is only wearing a pair of shorts...

Run off to where? Back in the apartment? Out the door? I had visions of Clark leaving the apartment with only a pair of shorts on....



Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the fdk Tahu! Glad you're enjoying it.

Jeff - Hmm, well obviously he put some clothes on first. But maybe I should rephrase that to say "I watch as Clark runs to his bedroom, presumably to put on some clothes before he goes off in search of Superman."

Ha ha ha! Thanks for pointing that out and for the fdk. I'll clear that up.

Glad you're enjoying the story.

I love your story, but darn it all if I wasn't frustrated when Mayson interrupted.

This part was absolutely great:

Rippling ripples.... I love it!

Ha, thanks Classicalla! I'm floored that you're reading both versions.

Um, yes, ripples... those are always good.


NOTE: For those of you following the PG version of this story... it will be a couple of days before I post part 4. Look for part 4 on Monday.

Thanks everyone for the feedback!

how could you do that to us? Till Monday? Are you sure?

Can't wait for part 4. Wanna know what happens with Lois and Mayson and Lex.

Ha ha! Tahu you're so funny. Go check out the nfic section if you want more...

That's what I did and I gave you a few lines feedback.