"Next on FOX - When good ideas go bad" or FDK: Evasive Action 4/5... - 06/26/06 08:05 AM
Okay Sue...I'm going to start this comment thread because I know you have readers out there on the PG boards, I've seen them and heard them. And I really want to see you finish this on the PG boards as well.
I'm not sure why no one has commented on this part because I LOVED it when I was beta reading it. Lois' "good idea" of crashing the Jeep to expose Superman...it went horribly wrong. Ha ha! I was in total shock when Superman/Clark didn't save them, and then them laughing about it afterwards, priceless. That was all so funny! One of the best revelations I've read. Mad Dog Lane at her very finest!
Please post the final part! Do you need help working the nfic in it down to PG? Holler at me if you need help! I'm anxious to see how you are able to do the final part. Don't get discouraged...I just know people are reading it.
If you readers out there need a recap or need to get caught up - and want Sue to finish this - go check it out. Here are the parts:
Evasive Action - Part One of Five
Part Two of Five
Part Three of Five
Part Four of Five
Part 5???
I'm not sure why no one has commented on this part because I LOVED it when I was beta reading it. Lois' "good idea" of crashing the Jeep to expose Superman...it went horribly wrong. Ha ha! I was in total shock when Superman/Clark didn't save them, and then them laughing about it afterwards, priceless. That was all so funny! One of the best revelations I've read. Mad Dog Lane at her very finest!
Please post the final part! Do you need help working the nfic in it down to PG? Holler at me if you need help! I'm anxious to see how you are able to do the final part. Don't get discouraged...I just know people are reading it.
If you readers out there need a recap or need to get caught up - and want Sue to finish this - go check it out. Here are the parts:
Evasive Action - Part One of Five
Part Two of Five
Part Three of Five
Part Four of Five
Part 5???