Wow, that was powerful. Why don't Lois tell Lex that she wants out of the marriage? Clark will help her. She's giving mixed signals and it's not going to be pretty when the chip falls.

Please post again soon. I'm enjoying staying on the edge of my seat.

ACK I wish I had more time to post feedback right now, especially since I was one of the ones who spent the last two days WAITING anxiously for part 5! I just want to say that I LOVE it, keep it coming, and I'm glad you made it - really was starting to worry about ya Kae!

Omg, I had to open up a new window to get out a series of snorts. Childen? Are you kidding, Lex?

And oh my god. *Commands* to come to bed? I would just *love* to knee him where it hurts right now.

Excellent, excellent part. Aggravating and frustrating, but excellent, lol. And it really does make me want to re-read the first story...I think I'll do that tonight...

Jen

OMG she needs to give a certain Mr. Luthor a lesson!!!! Can I, actually, jump in there at kick him myself??? Maybe you could write something like "and then Nicole Sullivan appeared out of the shadows like a really cool streetfighter and kicked Lex's butt!!!!". I think you could easily slip something like that riiiiight in there. Except it would totally be more fulfilling to the rest of the readers (and, okay, even to me) if we got to see Lois and Clark do it themselves. I CANNOT wait for more!!!! This is getting SO gooooooooood

I will come back more to actually comment on the story (I will! Seriously. Don't look like that). For the time being, just know that I'm dying over here and loving the story more with each section!!!

Nicole

Thanks, guys! Glad you're still enjoying the story. I hope the next part brings a partial answer to your question, Supergem!

Kaethel