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Posted By: KSaraSara OMG! Double whammy! or FDK - Just Him - 05/04/06 02:18 AM
Couldn't resist the title. wink Though there was another one I wish I could have used.... wink

Yay for the sequel!! All is right - L&C together again. devil

Sara smile
Posted By: Nicole S Re: OMG! Double whammy! or FDK - Just Him - 05/04/06 02:56 AM
Dave!!!!!!!!!!!!! whinging whinging whinging whinging whinging My heart actually feels heavy. And the tears are definitely real. This broke my heart... it really did. It was so beautiful!! blush mecry
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She'd never let him say goodbye. Never let him speak his final words. And her life, since then, had been about him. Had been lived for him.

The man who'd died in her arms. The man whose last gentle smile had been for her.
This... Dave!!! I really am at a loss for words. It's just so heart-breaking and fantastic. So truly sad. And hauntingly beautiful. The whole thing. mecry Nice!!

~Nicole smile

ps - thanks for taking my pestering as a polite request! I will keep that in mind in the future <g> wink
Posted By: LabRat Re: OMG! Double whammy! or FDK - Just Him - 05/04/06 05:23 AM
Oh...Dave. You break my heart. Watch LabRat's bottom lip wobble dangerously.

whinging

Now this is a beautiful, wonderful example of my very favourite kind of deathfic. The story that tells me that even death is no barrier to the love that Lois and Clark share and that somewhere they will continue on together, even after the end has come. A story about death. But also about hope. And love everlasting.

Just the way it should be. jump

<snuffle>

LabRat
Posted By: FinLi Re: OMG! Double whammy! or FDK - Just Him - 05/04/06 05:52 AM
I thought it was a very sweet story, a great sequel.

Lois had gone on, but had never forgotten about Clark...but then again, who could?

I loved it.

Bravo

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FinLi
Read this one while I was reading the other one. Again sad and wonderfully written! Hey dave? I've got some great death ideas, if you run out <EG>

Jen
Oye!

Are the bottoms of your boots a bit slippery there, Dave? Because I'm sure there's more heart bits under there...

Again, beautiful piece here. Great, but sad, example of how Clark has impacted her life during such a short time.

And the end's KINDA WAFFy if you squint laugh
Posted By: YConnell Re: OMG! Double whammy! or FDK - Just Him - 05/04/06 03:00 PM
<Gulp>

Yvonne <---- speechless
Posted By: Kent28 Re: OMG! Double whammy! or FDK - Just Him - 05/04/06 07:37 PM
whinging whinging whinging whinging whinging whinging whinging whinging

Dave,
That was beautiful, even if I am now a puddle of goo on the floor. Thanks for sharing that. I like that in the end, we see their love overcoming death.

Marcy
(who can't say much else for all the tears clouding her vision)
Posted By: Dave Re: OMG! Double whammy! or FDK - Just Him - 05/05/06 03:01 PM
Thanks, everyone for commenting. smile

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Yay for the sequel!! All is right - L&C together again. devil
You... are as evil as I am. <g> Possibly more. Possibly the more evil of the two Saras... <eg>

And thank you for the comments. smile

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My heart actually feels heavy. And the tears are definitely real. This broke my heart... it really did. It was so beautiful!!
Aw... and wow. smile

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Oh...Dave. You break my heart.
Funny how that's become such a huge compliment... thank you, Labby. smile

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Hey dave? I've got some great death ideas, if you run out <EG>
LOL! Thanks, Jen. I'll keep you in mind. <g>

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And the end's KINDA WAFFy if you squint
LOL! Thanks for that. <g>

I think I'm going to have to sit down and hash some waff out, just to prove to myself that I *can* write it. <g>

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<Gulp>

Yvonne <---- speechless
*too*

And a big thank you to Marcy and FinLi too. smile

Dave
Posted By: TriciaW Re: OMG! Double whammy! or FDK - Just Him - 05/05/06 11:36 PM
Dave

This is the perfect sequel. smile1

Tricia cool
Aww,

this is so nice.

As LabRat said - love how this shows the strength of their love. Even if they lost their chance in this world, they'll be together in heaven.

love

See ya,
AnnaBtG.
Posted By: lovetvfan Re: OMG! Double whammy! or FDK - Just Him - 05/07/06 10:41 PM
Oh well shatter my perfect delusions why don't ya? wink

I just loved this. Beautiful. Sad. Touching.

Wonderful!
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