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Well, that's all folcs laugh . I hope you enjoyed it!!! I certainly had fun writing it.

This part was my favorite of all 4 parts -- and it is dedicated to Annie and anyone else who has lived/still lives in one of those "boring states with a lot of vowels." (I have so many stories about that... yes, people have actually confused Ohio and Idaho before). Annie is *very* lucky because she escaped laugh . Some of us have lived in O-h-i-o for 22+ years.

Please leave any and all comments here (good, bad, ugly) smile .

- Alicia smile1
Ahhh! Wonderful and WAFFy, Alicia! Just a perfect ending to a fun story.

Love Barry shooing them out the door as fast as possible.

Irene smile
Perfect ending, indeed. Sorry, I'm just too bummed out by HP5 to say anything else.

Jen
YAY! goofy

Beautiful vows in the cornfield. Shame about Hawaii, but heck, they can go there as a weekend trip, so I refuse to feel too sorry for them wink

PJ
Hi,

Great story. smile1

MAF hyper
AWWWWWW!! What a sweet and beautiful story Alicia!!! thumbsup

Your right, parts 3 & 4 are now my favorites too!! laugh I can not believe they managed to get married with no traumas involved!!! clap

S (who's just going to revel in the warm fussys for a while now!! wink )
I've been really busy this week so I haven't kept up with this fic, but watch this space cause I'm gonna catch up this weekend and leave lots of good FDK. laugh

~Anna

EDIT: Hurray!! Both for me finishing the story, and for Alicia writing it. laugh

As promised, I'm here with lots of good FDK. smile There were lots of moments in this fic where I smiled and laughed and sighed waffily. You did a great job putting together a story that was both very sweet and funny. The whole story was great, but I'd have to say that my favorite parts were when they talked about the costumes and when they said their vows. Great job, Alicia! Keep writing! thumbsup
They deserve an uneventful ending. Great story

doublel
That was just the sweetest thing. thumbsup clap
Alicia notworthy

A wonderful ending to a beautiful story. And, what I think was best about this was that every single thing that Lois and Clark did made perfect sense, was logical in every way. Of course, we can't forget all the WAFFy moments. *sigh* Thank you for giving us this treat to read.

Caroline
ooo. good part. smile

nice wedding. <g> was afraid for a sec when you commented on the age of the guy marrying them that we'd get a speech about how "mawwige is wat bwings ush twogewer to-day..." wink

oh, good. i'd meant to ask about hotel reservations. i'm glad you thought of it.

i'm glad they stopped in smallville.

i like martha's reaction. immediately gets it, then acts vaguely smug, then shoos them out. nice. smile

i like the adaption of the black teddy. nice job working that in. smile

i also like them saying their own vows afterwards.

lol about idaho.

too bad about the corn field. i mean, they could have gone and found a slightly more romantic spot... oh well. at least the right people were there.

was a bit surprised that lois's list of men she's known (not dated, known) didn't include her father. maybe better that way, tho.

i like the quick exit from the cornfield, and clark's musings about it (not for the first time, but no objections if it happens to come up again).

nice ending. smile and yay! no wells interrupting about curses and stuff!

great story alicia. smile thanks for sharing. smile

Paul
Alicia, I haven't had a chance to comment on the last couple of parts, but I just got caught up on everything now. A lovely story. They finally got married, without any major disaster getting in the way!

I loved them stopping in the middle of the corn field to say their wedding vows - I'm glad that you noted that it was a secluded area, because if anyone happened to wander by and see Superman saying wedding vows with Lois Lane out in the middle of a corn field... :p

And since they decided to stay the night in Metropolis, it seemed the perfect moment for H.G. Wells to show up, wondering if he was "interrupting" something. I'm *really* glad that he didn't. I bet Lois and Clark are too. smile

Thanks for the wonderful story.

KathyM
Cool! cool

And romantic smile

I wonder Ellen's reaction wink

Jose wave
Terrific, Alicia!! smile1
Alicia

This is great. So Funny!
I just laughed and laughed at some of the lines. smile1

There is also some excellent introspection throughout. Your characterizations are spot on.

Congratulations on a superbly written story! Just perfect! clap

Tricia cool
Loved this! Thank you, and please write another story soon smile

Melisma (WAFFed out here under her Rock)
Ah, Alicia, how clever of you!

You have fooled all the gentle readers with this sweet waffy ending. Everyone is going away feeling all warm and runny, and they don't even realize that they've just seen one of the biggest whams in LoisandClark fanfiction.

We all know from the series, that Lois is fated to DIE if she and Clark ever consumate their relationship before lifting the old curse. I guess this is goodbye to Lois. Poor Clark, he is going to be so bummed.

Tank (who gives Alicia high marks for being able to sneak in such a significant wham, almost undetected amongst all the sweetness and waff)
Awwwwww, nice part, Alicia. Wonderfully waffy. thumbsup

So they're finally married, without all the trouble of curses and people trying to prevent them to get married. And the ceremony, the stop in Smallville and their vows were so romantic!

I have no idea about the location of states in the US, but I got the picture of Idoha and it's funny for Lois to mention. smile

As this is wonderful, will you have more like this for us soon?

Saskia
Aw Sweet ending! Laura
Yay! Well done!

The Express Wedding Chapel... it is of course the best option. Safest in the long run!

Thank you smile

Helga
Hey Alicia!
I'm late...just recently spotted the last part of this on boards recently and since I asked you about it on irc, I just *had* to read it! And boy, I'm glad I didnt procrastinate...this time at least - this was wonderful! smile

I loved the introspective when Lois decides to elope...funny that it never occured to me that Lois might not remember the details of her wrecked wedding...but her blocking that particular trauma out makes perfect sense!

Made me go smile1
Alicia,
I loved the story
great ending
write something else soon please
merry
Hi Alicia,

I just caught up on this story and have to say I thought it was a very nice combination of funny, tongue-in-cheek and waffy. laugh

Well done!

Yours Jenni
Nice finish, Alicia! The wedding itself was comical simply because it was so rushed. wink And the parts after that were sweet and waffy! Sorry it took me so long to get to read this, but I was just glad to find the time to finish it! laugh Another great part! I especially loved the stopever in Smallville and the bits right before and after that. Don't think you get a break from writing now though, just because you finished... wildguy

Jana
Whoops, sorry it took so long for me to reply.

Thank you all so much for your comments throughout this story -- they mean so much to me. This story was so much fun for me to write and I hope you all had as much fun reading it as I did writing it! I purposely left the possibility of whether Soul Mates happened completely up in the air -- so people that *like* Soul Mates can assume that Wells interrupts just as things are starting, or people that don't like soulmates can assume it never happened (I'll let you guess which camp I'm in wink ).

And to anyone that asked, I am definately still writing -- I have two short stories that are complete and are currently with my BRs smile . Look for them soon on the LCficmb near you wink .


Alicia smile1
Wow! That was fun, Alicia! Even the Tank Ending was funny since the Waffy one was there too.

dance

Lots of laughs and waffs!
Thanks!
claire
Hi Alicia, yours is the first story I read since I've been away on vacation. It put a big smile on my face. LOL! What a fun story, just what I needed to get back into things! laugh

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And to anyone that asked, I am definately still writing - I have two short stories that are complete and are currently with my BRs
Yay!! hyper

Looking forward to finding them here, Alicia.

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