FDK: First Kiss - 02/16/24 03:58 PM
Re: FDK: First Kiss - 02/16/24 04:20 PM
I'm grinning like an idiot now.
This was so sweet and adorably them.
So much for not changing anything, but it has been a long time.
I guess HG Wells isn't going to fix this, and now, I think Lois and Clark would fight teeth and nail for him not to.
Looking forward to more.....
This was so sweet and adorably them.
So much for not changing anything, but it has been a long time.
I guess HG Wells isn't going to fix this, and now, I think Lois and Clark would fight teeth and nail for him not to.
Looking forward to more.....
Re: FDK: First Kiss - 02/16/24 04:35 PM
Great story. If there is no way to avoid making any changes at all then you might as well make some changes that you want.
Ohh the trouble they could cause...
When are they going to start stalking Lex?
Ohh the trouble they could cause...
When are they going to start stalking Lex?
Re: FDK: First Kiss - 02/16/24 06:10 PM
I love these!!! This one was sweet and adorable, and I am SO looking forward to finding out if Martha overheard and understood that conversation! More please! 
Re: FDK: First Kiss - 02/16/24 07:26 PM
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Suddenly, the sound of someone clearing their throat came from behind and the two teenagers sprung apart, Clark’s hand dropping abruptly to his own lap. They both spun to see Martha Kent standing in the doorway between the living room and the kitchen.
“Mom!” Clark exclaimed, his eyes wide like a deer caught in headlights. "How long have you been standing there?"
Martha set her hands on her hips and eyed the teens disapprovingly. "Longer than you'd like"
“Mom!” Clark exclaimed, his eyes wide like a deer caught in headlights. "How long have you been standing there?"
Martha set her hands on her hips and eyed the teens disapprovingly. "Longer than you'd like"
Oh my stars and garters ...they are in so much trouble!
Martha is going to pack Lois up and send her back to Metropolis quicker than you can say, 'hot apple pie!'Great series!
Re: FDK: First Kiss - 02/17/24 05:15 PM
Hi Amanda!
Well, I guess we wouldn’t have a fun series if he had 
LOIS: If I investigated Lex eight years sooner, you think he might be more vulnerable than he was? I mean, I could go undercover, given his schoolgirl fetish…
CLARK:
CLARK: What? Rescuing people is what I always do? Did do. Did? /turns left/ You alright, Miss?
JENNA: /giggles nervously/
First kiss? When is this? And when did they allow live-in girlfriends?
Definitely teenagers. A dangerous time, this is for the hero. Hormones. I can sense hormones raging.
LOIS: No, Daddy, I really do want to spend summer on a farm. I love cows and pigs. Feeding them and milking them and collecting their eggs in the morning. Julie even told me that you get chocolate pies from brown cows!
Probably discover a nefarious scheme involving camp girls and the gentlemen’s club in the next town over, resulting in the arrest of half the camp staff.
This really does sound like he’s around seventeen. And they let Lois visit?
LOIS:
No, actually…
Soul travel is weird.
Oh, so, fourteen?
/points above /
Has she flowered? Because I think Sansa and Joffrey were that age, too.
Now there’s a change!
Awww
Looking forward to the next one!
Michael
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Wells never got back to them.
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So here they are trying not to change anything… or at least not too much…
CLARK:
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… but, well, changing things all over the place because it’s sort of hard not to… or just because they can.
CLARK: What? Rescuing people is what I always do? Did do. Did? /turns left/ You alright, Miss?
JENNA: /giggles nervously/
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I am so glad your parents agreed to let me stay for the summer.” Lois said,
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“Are you kidding? They love having you here. Of course they agreed. I’m just surprised your parents let you come.”
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Lois giggled. “I just convinced Daddy that it would cost him a lot less money and time to simply send me here rather than try to force me to stay at ten different summer camps.
LOIS: No, Daddy, I really do want to spend summer on a farm. I love cows and pigs. Feeding them and milking them and collecting their eggs in the morning. Julie even told me that you get chocolate pies from brown cows!
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“You wouldn’t really cause trouble.”
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They were married for goodness’ sake – well… sort of
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“Are you asking me to take you to the dance? You know I’d love to, but I don’t have any way to get to Metropolis. I still can’t… you know.” Clark moved his hand in a vague flying motion.
LOIS:
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Clark blinked as his mind caught up to her babble. “So… you want to change something. You could avoid dancing to that song or maybe go with someone else?”
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And so, I guess what I’m trying to say is – Clark, will you kiss me?”
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Clark gasped and Lois was pleasantly surprised to realize that he was blushing now. “Lois! W-we’re kids!”
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Lois rolled her eyes at him. “I’m thirteen, Clark. And you’re fourteen.”
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We’re still kids. We’re too young to be doing things like that.”
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“Seriously?” Lois scoffed. “I guess I shouldn’t be that surprised coming from the guy who’s still a v… very patient man.”
Clark frowned at her even as his face turned the color of a tomato. “Not my fault.”
“Right. Blame H.G. Wells.
Clark frowned at her even as his face turned the color of a tomato. “Not my fault.”
“Right. Blame H.G. Wells.
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Lana and I were pretty good friends the last time around.”
“Oh, really? Why aren’t you now?”
“Well, I guess because now I’ve got you.”
“Oh, really? Why aren’t you now?”
“Well, I guess because now I’ve got you.”
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It wasn’t anything like the kisses they had shared before – when they were adults. It was short and simple and… sweet. And, as far as first kisses go, it was absolutely perfect. Because it was Clark.
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Suddenly, the sound of someone clearing their throat came from behind and the two teenagers sprung apart, Clark’s hand dropping abruptly to his own lap.
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“Mom!” Clark exclaimed, his eyes wide like a deer caught in headlights. “How long have you been standing there?”
Martha set her hands on her hips and eyed the teens disapprovingly. “Longer than you’d like”
Martha set her hands on her hips and eyed the teens disapprovingly. “Longer than you’d like”
Looking forward to the next one!
Michael
Re: FDK: First Kiss - 02/17/24 10:46 PM
I audibly scream/laughed at the end!😱🤣
I hope we get a scene directly following this one.
I hope we get a scene directly following this one.
Re: FDK: First Kiss - 02/27/24 04:38 PM
This was so sweet. And what a way to use the Challenge phrase. I love it. Poor Clark, he's in for trouble. Amazing story
Re: FDK: First Kiss - 03/31/24 02:29 AM
This is so fun to work the challenge into this!
Awwwww!! I love this!
This is so darling and naive.
:rotfl:
I love how many times you really make them allude to/reconcile with their dual reality.
I feel like this is so sweet in the moment, but is so impactful to the reader because, well, isn't this what we all want? And not all of us get it.
OMG, I just love Clark. So scandalized... But he's got to also be, what, 43 now, technically? 
Bet that saved him a lot of drama this time!
This is perfect coming from her! Also, it's amazing that Clark's kept this from his parents for so long!! I get keeping it from the Lanes but I'm so impressed that they chose not to tell the Kents and then stuck to it!
This series is always so much fun to read!
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“I am so glad your parents agreed to let me stay for the summer.”
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“You wouldn’t really cause trouble.”
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He’d certainly gotten her out of enough scrapes in the past… future… whatever.
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They were married for goodness’ sake – well… sort of.
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I realized that I don’t want to leave something like that up to chance when I have the opportunity to decide who I want to share my first kiss with.
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Clark gasped and Lois was pleasantly surprised to realize that he was blushing now. “Lois! W-we’re kids!”
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"Lana and I were pretty good friends the last time around.”
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Martha set her hands on her hips and eyed the teens disapprovingly. "Longer than you'd like"
This series is always so much fun to read!