FDK: Watching Your Life Go By - 12/07/23 07:26 PM
Let me know what you think.
Re: FDK: Watching Your Life Go By - 12/07/23 11:32 PM
Wow. 
How badly was Clark hurt? Will his secret be safe from Luthor?
I think that last stunt certainly revealed it to Lois.
Can't wait for the next part!
How badly was Clark hurt? Will his secret be safe from Luthor?
I think that last stunt certainly revealed it to Lois.Can't wait for the next part!
Re: FDK: Watching Your Life Go By - 12/08/23 01:01 AM
I love that this is actually a series now!! 
This whole chapter just feel like pure adrenaline!
You really have a knack for writing Lex's gaslighting! This and the way he hands the ring back to her are so deeply sociopathic.
Mercy, Lois, that is not a smart move! This is so in character for her to just brashly throw herself into danger.
I can just hear this in John Shea's voice. So well done.
Oh, dang. That's so interesting! To use a negative emotion this way.
This line really got me! Clark finds his sass right now? He and Lois are such a perfect pair.
This is so tense!
I cannot believe you're giving us a cliff-hanger here! But I'm so glad that this is a series now!
This whole chapter just feel like pure adrenaline!
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"I wanted to convince Mr. Kent to come to our wedding. Seems like you beat me to it.”
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She shakes her head. “I know what you did!”
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“Darling, Lois, these are the fantasies of a very desperate man. Nothing about this is true.”
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The rage returns the feeling to my numb limbs and I hold onto it. All my life I've kept a tight rein on that particular emotion. But now I turn it into my anchor.
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“Do you plan on marrying her at gun point, too?”
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She's falling with me.
My heart stops.
My heart stops.
I cannot believe you're giving us a cliff-hanger here! But I'm so glad that this is a series now!
Re: FDK: Watching Your Life Go By - 12/08/23 03:16 PM
I. Have. No. Words!!!! Just....hnnnnng!!! COME BACK AND FINISH THIS!!!
Please. o.o
Please. o.o
Re: FDK: Watching Your Life Go By - 12/08/23 09:21 PM
EEEEEEEEEEEP!!!!!!
*eagerly awaiting next week's installment!!!*
*eagerly awaiting next week's installment!!!*
Re: FDK: Watching Your Life Go By - 12/09/23 02:01 AM
I was going to wait until next week to read this... but couldn't resist. Is it next Friday yet?
Re: FDK: Watching Your Life Go By - 12/09/23 09:16 AM
Thank you so so much for your feedback. ❤️ I know this was kind of an evil cliffhanger.🫣 I'll go back to writing, so there will be another installment for next Friday
Re: FDK: Watching Your Life Go By - 12/29/23 11:15 AM
Hi Barbara!
What about reading this as a Christmas treat? 
(FDK is a couple days late. Sorry!)
We all believe that, right?
At first I thought this was Lois. Then the idea came that this sounds like kryptonite poisoning.
Lex is a bit icky there.
/thinking back to the Discord discussion/
His life is quickly going down the drain. Hmm… that’s actually way too close to the correct meaning. I guess nothing beats a bad translation software.
Keep up the façade!
I’ve seen this before. Jurassic Park, the Velociraptor scene.
Oh come on. That’s *so* Jurassic Park.
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That would be embarrassing.
LEX : 
Also, she might need a bit of rest. Maybe a bit of hormonal rebalancing?
Poor Clark!
If the archbishop agrees? It’s been good practice for centuries, why stop now?
TEMPUS: Copyright infringement!
That can’t be good.
Did he accidentally shoot himself with the green k bullet? Or did Lois’s patella connect with his reproductive system?
I backtracked and those hints such as the cool air….nicely done driving Clark out onto the terrace and then have Lois stumble together with Clark over the balustrade
I can see why FoLC were quite interested in the next part.
Michael
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I'd say, hope you enjoy, but well... Consider yourself warned.
(FDK is a couple days late. Sorry!)
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Lois? You're here? I had no idea!”
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I stumble back, catching myself against the banister, unsure what slams into me first. Is it Luthor’s hand as he pushes me out of the way, the dizziness that makes the room spin or the intense wave of agony?
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His words are muffled by the ringing in my ears. “What a lovely surprise. I wanted to convince Mr. Kent to come to our wedding. Seems like you beat me to it.”
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Still, I feel the radiation of the poisonous rock draining me.
His life is quickly going down the drain. Hmm… that’s actually way too close to the correct meaning. I guess nothing beats a bad translation software.
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Taking a deep breath, I manage to calm my racing heart and try not to look as if I’m about to collapse.
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Luthor holds out his arms to embrace Lois, but she retreats, one step back for each one he takes toward her.
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With a final step she comes up to the wall behind her and suddenly, Luthor’s awfully close.
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Getting closer to the kryptonite will likely have me crumble in a heap right before his eyes.
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Lois raises her chin in defiance. “There will be no wedding, Lex.”
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Did he tell you that?” As he points at me, his mask slips. Rage mares his features, before he schools them back into that jovial mask of a devoted fiancé. “Darling, Lois, these are the fantasies of a very desperate man. Nothing about this is true.”
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Dark spots dance before my eyes.
Yet, I stand my ground. “Leave her alone!”
Yet, I stand my ground. “Leave her alone!”
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The room is spinning around me. “Do you plan on marrying her at gun point, too?”
TEMPUS: Copyright infringement!
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The world spins around me like crazy. Pain explodes in my chest the moment I hear the bang. I can’t breathe.
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His eyes are wide open, his face contorted in pain and despair before he disappears from my view.
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With a strangled cry I fight gravity. It’s not enough to pull us upward, but I manage to break our fall and find some forward momentum, speeding away from the alley behind my building and down the deserted streets.
I can see why FoLC were quite interested in the next part.
Michael