FDK: Future Perfect 3/? - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

What a lovely, enjoyable chapter. I read it all with a smile on my face. Lucy's bubbly personality is just the right thing for Lois.

Looking forward to seeing her return to Clark and the kids.

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Lois exclaimed, “Luce, you got married?!”

“Lois, pipe down!” Lucy hissed as she tugged her hand away, “Yes, I got married in the summer.”

“What’s his name?” Lois asked eagerly, wondering who managed to tame her free-spirited sister.

Lucy rolled her eyes and chuckled, “Lois, I’m married to Jimmy.”

“Olsen?!”

and can read all my LC stories!!!!! Keep this one coming! I agree that it's completely enjoyable and I also want to see Lois back with her family.

~NICOLE

Short but sweet, Chriscy! Good to see Lois coming to her senses - though I don't blame her for getting a little crazy over the realization that she has lost eleven years of her life! I mean, how would you feel if you were in Lois's shoes here?

Then again... Being told that you are so happily married that

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You two could never keep your eyes, lips or hands off each other! You act like silly teenagers all the time. He's the best there is, Lois. You two can't screw it up if you tried.

Well, then life could be worse, couldn't it?

And hey, I love the way Lucy is taking the news of what has happened:

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"You do believe me, don't you?" Lois implored.

After a deep breath and a pause, Lucy replied, "Yeah, I guess I do, sis. Gosh, the weirdest things happen to you."

"Gosh, the weirdest things happen to you..." FoLCs, imagine having met your sister the other day or so, and now she's telling you that she's just lost eleven years of her life??? And all you say is, "Gosh, the weirdest things happen to you."??? Lucy, it's priceless! I love you! Never let anybody say it doesn't show that you are Lois Lane's sister!

But, Lucy, there may be one little thing that you have missed:

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I'm pretty sure he has no criminal records, addictions, deep, dark secrets that no one can find out about or anything like that." Lucy said teasingly.

Ah.. Lucy.. I wouldn't call Clark's secret dark...

Well, Chriscy, you have me rolling on the floor so much here that I may not have to vacuum it this Christmas, but instead I guess I may have to do the laundry twice!

Oh, and yes, Lois. Yes, you should go home now, getting to know that hunk of a husband of yours and your children. OK, you don't know them, and you are not the sentimental type, but your children should be with their mother on Christmas, comprende?

Ann

Oh it was a sweet chapter. Smart Lois. More soon. Laura

This was a sweet chapter. Glad Lois is going home to her gorgeous husband.

Hi,

Great part.

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“No,” Lois cut her off, “I think I should go home and apologize…and get to know my family.” Lois couldn’t help but think how foreign it felt to say that. “I don’t see how I could possibly reverse all this, so I might as well try to get my life back together again and try to pick up where I’ve been put. But thanks.”

“You feeling okay though? Are you up to all that?”

Come back here!

More ASAP, please.

MAF

One complain.... it was short!!!!

Ditto on the SHORTNESSS!!!

But, it was a great SHORT post.

James

Aw, what a sweet part. I'm glad Lucy succeede in talking Lois into returning to her family.

Looking forward to more

~Julia

As usual, I'm just so, so happy everyone liked it! Thanks for reading, guys!

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Oh...and...I like your other avatar better!

Ah, this you need to blame my Photoshop Wizard best friend for.

This sort of thing happens quite often when you hand over your digicam and pose willingly for a Photoshop-fiend-fashion-boy.

The interesting thing is, I don't even really catch all the humour when I'm writing. It's cool to see what everyone finds funny!

Happy holidays!

Chriscy