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Posted By: KSaraSara FDK: So Far Away 1/21 - 09/16/22 11:32 PM
Welcome home, Clark!

You can find the story TOC here (with links to the first and second stories as well if you want or need to catch up!)

This story the third in the Wherever You Will Go Series.
Story 1: Wherever You Will Go (nfic version archived here)
Story 2: Away From the Sun (nfic version archived here)
Posted By: Queen of the Capes Re: FDK: So Far Away 1/21 - 09/17/22 01:14 AM
Thank you again for letting me be part of such an epic fic!

Somehow, coming back to chapter one after seeing how it all shakes out, I'm knocked back by even *more* feels than the first time! Clark's disorientation so feelable here, and so tragic. The fact that you can write so powerfully *and* keep it going strong over multiple chapters is impressive! My hat is off to you, Woman!
Posted By: Blueowl Re: FDK: So Far Away 1/21 - 09/17/22 01:22 AM
Welp, I'm in tears.

The realistic feel of this is so intense it's amazing, from the emotion to the things they never tell new parents. And knowing from personal experience, baby poop really does get /everywhere/.

Anyway, I hope he gives himself some time and isn't too hard on himself, though knowing Clark....

Can't wait for more!
Posted By: CarrieRene Re: FDK: So Far Away 1/21 - 09/17/22 01:45 AM
I still love how you started this. So much emotion and the way he is starting to remember what it feels like to be human. I am so happy I was part of this also. Thank you.
Posted By: bakasi Re: FDK: So Far Away 1/21 - 09/17/22 10:34 AM
I like how this starts. Clark's confusion is palpable. I can't wait to learn more about what happened on Krypton and how Clark is going to pull through.
Posted By: KSaraSara Re: FDK: So Far Away 1/21 - 09/18/22 06:13 AM
Originally Posted by Queen of the Capes
The fact that you can write so powerfully *and* keep it going strong over multiple chapters is impressive! My hat is off to you, Woman!

GAHH!! What a lovely, amazing compliment!! I love hearing that everything is so feelable, too!! Thank you for all your amazing help!! love

Blueowl—ahh!! I *LOVE* that I made you cry! (That sounds horrible but you know what I mean!) Thank you so much for letting me know what you thought and that it felt realistic and intense—high praise! Thank you!! And yeah… you know Clark… he’ll try, though!

CarrieRene—I love hearing when people can really feel the emotions! That’s always my goal when I write because that’s what I LOVE as a reader. Thanks so much for the help and the feedback!!

Bakasi—Yay for palpable confusion!! We’re definitely going to find out more about what happened on New Krypton…buckle in! (Which, to me, is still weird to say because I had been *adamant* about not wanting to do ANY New Krypton scenes because…who wants to write that?? Well, apparently my muse was dying to write that! Who knew?)

Thank you all for the feedback! love

Chapter 2 coming up in a few (because it’s already Sunday here and I’m impatient. lol)

Sara smile

Posted By: AmyPrime Re: FDK: So Far Away 1/21 - 09/19/22 01:08 AM
Hey, I remember this story! Looking forward to the continuation.
Posted By: KSaraSara Re: FDK: So Far Away 1/21 - 09/20/22 06:19 AM
Thanks, Amy! I hope you enjoy!!

Sara smile
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