All comments are welcome here.

This is a multi-chapter fic - Rewrite of the Pilot where we explore what could have happened if we had seen Clark Kent display a little more patience throughout the Pilot.

Hmmm.... Interesting premise about exploring a more patient Clark. This should be a great new and creative perspective on the pilot and hopefully subsequent episodes.

Hey SupesFan!

It'll cover more than just the Pilot but definitely with a different take from Clark and some from Lois as well. As you can see in the Teaser it's not your typical Episode Adaptation. Hope you enjoy!

Okay, okay, so I might have left a bit of a cliffhanger out there for you all to chew on for the week. Barring any disasters I'm hoping to be posting once a week so we'll see how that goes.

Chapter 2 is up. Enjoy!

Yay! I have been waiting!

Delightful. And I love it that Lois knows from the start.

Hey Morgana!

The wait is over. Next chapter is up for weekly update.



Hey Framework!

I'm glad you liked the twist in the introduction of Superman and Lois. More to come!

Chapter 3 is up.

Okay, this definitely is an intersting take. I like Lois' reaction to Superman and Clark. I hope they'll sit down and talk soon. Waiting for more

Hey all,

Sorry for the delay on the update. Chapter 5 is up and ready for your enjoyment. I hope to get more regular with the postings. It's honestly just been crazy with RL and the Kerths prep. I hope everyone enjoys this chapter.

It was a lot of fun to draw out the naming of our favorite hero.

Hey bakasi!

Thanks for reading. Yeah, Lois' reaction is very different from cannon for obvious reasons. I'm enjoying writing this different take on our favorite characters. I'm hoping everyone is enjoying this fic as much as I am

Just caught up, and I'm absolutely loving this! This is exactly what I was looking for when I asked if there were any post-early-reveal fics; I love how Lois is supportive of Clark and adding her own contributions to the Lexcorp investigation! This almost feels like a fixfic, "What if everyone was smarter in S1?" We've got Lois seeing through both Luthor and Clark, Clark not coming across as jealous and petty, Luthor finding B39... More please.

Hey Queenie!

I'm so glad you liked what I've got so far. There's a lot of fun in this one. I hope it's everything you were searching for in your pursuit for early season reveals.

Chapter 6 is up and ready for your divulgence as requested.

Latest chapter is up. Chapter 9.

Chapter 10 is now up. We should have regular postings now that the Kerths are over.

Hope everyone enjoys! All comments welcome as always.

Chapter 11 is now up.

Hope everyone enjoys! All comments welcome as always.

Okay, this is getting interesting. I'm curious what's going to happen next and how Luthor's presence will affect the following events.

Waiting for the next part

Urgh! It is time for me to get back into the swing of things and comment on this story! Welcome back. Enjoying what's been posted so far.

Hey bakasi!

Yeah, I'm totally taking liberty with the events in cannon now. Lex Luthor in Smallville with Trask was too tempting not to play into it some. Hope you like the next part.


Hey Morgana!

Thanks for the welcome back. I guess I've been a little AWOL during Kerths on this fic but we're getting pretty close to a conclusion. Hope you enjoy the next part and thank you for reading and commenting.

Chapter 12 is now up.

When in DEEP trouble, call Martha and Jonathan!

Just read chapter 13. Fanning myself as I turn on the cold water in my shower. I am so glad you are continuing to "rule" this story.

Hey guys,

Sorry for the long hiatus. RL has thrown up a curveball at me and I'm trying to make it through the day. I'm going through a divorce right now. I'm hoping by beginning of October things will have settled down enough for me to focus on editing this last bit of this fic. Thanks for your understanding.

I’m sorry you’re going through that I thoroughly enjoy reading your work and will be waiting.

Really sorry to read about this. Please take each day one at a time. As Chickberry said, we will be here patiently waiting.

I, too, echo Chickberry and Morgana. My heart goes out to you.

Hey all. I know it's been a long while. As I posted awhile back I've been dealing with a lot of RL stuff that slowed my muse down quite a bit. Well, I'm finally feeling in the right headspace to get this fic wrapped up and dipping myself back in. Hope everyone enjoys. Chapter is here.

Thanks everyone for hanging in this long with me. I hope everyone enjoys this one. Final chapter - Chapter 16 is up and ready.

Thank you!

Who is the whistleblower? My money is on either Daitch or Bernie.

Finished! Nice way to bring Jack and his brother Denny into the story. Will there be a sequel?