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Posted By: Endelda FDK: Duck, Duck, Excuse - 06/09/19 07:55 AM
Story

Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoyed it! [Linked Image]
Posted By: NostalgiaKick Re: FDK: Duck, Duck, Excuse - 06/09/19 11:58 AM
Yay E! I love this story... it’s just so freakin adorable. All the happy WAFF! Great job. (And I’m always happy to beta for you smile )
Posted By: Mouserocks Re: FDK: Duck, Duck, Excuse - 06/09/19 06:56 PM
lol and sloppy All in one!

This was so stinking cute! Clark caring for these ducklings and then Lois getting panicked when she went and they weren't there anymore.. gah there was too much sweetness to comment on it all! But I will say the rational connection she made about Clark flying through the sky was perfectly done clap brava!
Posted By: Queen of the Capes Re: FDK: Duck, Duck, Excuse - 06/10/19 01:54 AM
clap Beautiful! I love it! This was sweet and hysterical, and absolutely perfect fluff! Bravissimo! clap
Posted By: Endelda Re: FDK: Duck, Duck, Excuse - 06/10/19 03:31 AM
Originally Posted by NostalgiaKick
Yay E! I love this story... it’s just so freakin adorable. All the happy WAFF! Great job. (And I’m always happy to beta for you smile )

Thanks Feli, I had a lot of fun playing with it!

Originally Posted by Mouserocks
lol and sloppy All in one!

This was so stinking cute! Clark caring for these ducklings and then Lois getting panicked when she went and they weren't there anymore.. gah there was too much sweetness to comment on it all! But I will say the rational connection she made about Clark flying through the sky was perfectly done clap brava!

awww, thank you! And thanks again, I was really proud of that logical progression grin

Originally Posted by Queen of the Capes
clap Beautiful! I love it! This was sweet and hysterical, and absolutely perfect fluff! Bravissimo! clap

[Linked Image] thank you so much, that's exactly what I was aiming for!
Posted By: folc4evernaday Re: FDK: Duck, Duck, Excuse - 06/10/19 01:16 PM
rotflol

Originally Posted by Endelda
Clark looked down, and a smile slowly snuck its way onto his lips. He looked back up at her tentatively. “Don’t you mean our ducks?”

She took a few moments to wipe her eyes and catch her breath before answering. “Yeah, I guess they are our ducks, aren’t they?” She looked at him thoughtfully. “So… now what?”

He held out a careful hand. “Would you like to come flying with me and the kids?”

This line here made me giggle more than I ought to but I absolutely loved it!

Originally Posted by Endelda
He broke eye contact and cleared his throat, staring at the pocket like he could see the babies through the fabric. “Huey, Dewey, Louie, Daffy, Daisy, and… um… *mumble*.”

Lois giggled. “And what?!

Clark darted a glance at her. “Howard.”

Her jaw dropped and she slapped him on the arm, pulling the punch at the last second when she remembered not to jostle the ducklings. “You named a sweet little innocent baby Howard the Duck?

This bantering right here is what happiness is made of! I have been told so many times "You have to see this move."

frown No, I don't.

Originally Posted by Endelda
He gave an embarrassed laugh. “Hey, I was a sophomore in college when that came out! All my friends thought it was hilarious!”

Lois nudged him again. “It was disgusting!”

Clark grinned at her. “Well yeah, I know that now. It still seemed like a funny name for this little guy.” He patted one of the lumps.

She shook her head. “No. No way, you should change his name to Donald before he’s old enough to know better.”

He gave an exaggerated sigh and rolled his eyes, pretending to be heavily put-upon. “Fiiiiine. If it bothers you so much, I’ll change it to Donald.”

Thank you for this moment right here. I love that he caved so easily to the name change and that Lois made him refuse that awful movie connection. smile Great job!
Posted By: Endelda Re: FDK: Duck, Duck, Excuse - 06/11/19 01:59 AM
Thanks Val, I'm glad you enjoyed it! grin
Posted By: cuidadora Re: FDK: Duck, Duck, Excuse - 06/12/19 10:58 PM
Delightful story! And what a unique reveal. rotflol
Posted By: Endelda Re: FDK: Duck, Duck, Excuse - 06/13/19 03:10 AM
Thanks cuidadora, glad you enjoyed it! I had a lot of fun writing it grin
Posted By: AmyPrime Re: FDK: Duck, Duck, Excuse - 06/15/19 01:54 AM
That was very original and fun!
Posted By: Endelda Re: FDK: Duck, Duck, Excuse - 06/15/19 03:00 AM
Thanks Amy, I'm glad you liked it!
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: Duck, Duck, Excuse - 06/18/19 03:50 PM
That was adorable, E! I'd pick out favorite lines, but that would basically be me quoting the whole thing. I loooove the image of a sheepish, newly outed Clark surrounded by ducks btw. Great story! More little gems, please!
Posted By: TaliaJoy Re: FDK: Duck, Duck, Excuse - 02/08/20 10:22 PM
Amazing. Absolutely loved it. Such an adorable, cute and heartfelt story!
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: Duck, Duck, Excuse - 02/09/20 01:18 AM
How, How did I miss this sweet and very different story? Talk about original reveal! wave
Posted By: Endelda Re: FDK: Duck, Duck, Excuse - 02/14/20 05:16 AM
Thank you ladies, I'm glad you enjoyed it! blush grin
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