I’m so very excited to finally begin posting my story. This story idea came from a dream I had around 20 years ago that I always thought would have made a good movie. I have never been considered a writer (though perhaps now I should), but after a chance discovery of NaNoWriMo on October 29th, 2018, I somehow came to the conclusion that despite having a fulltime job and busy family, it was totally reasonable that I should be able to “win”. One month and 55,449 words later, I still wasn’t done . With the help of some awesome people in a hangouts chat, I finally made it to the end .

Altogether, it is split up into four parts (with meaningful headings ), or 34 chapters and an epilogue. I plan to post a chapter at a time twice a week (which should be doable since its all done but I have been known to have unusual things happen to mess my plans up...).

I’m super excited for feedback, so lay it on, good or bad!

Wow. That is an intriguing start! Well written. Seems like time has been changed in some way. Tempus? Will be here reading to find out? Thanks for writing.

That's what I was going for!

Thank you.

You are welcome and I hope you like what you find out!

Thanks for this great start. I love it

My goodness! What a great introduction for your story! Intriguing, mysterious and heart-wrenching. Looking forward to more!

You are welcome!

My goal was to provide the reader with some shock. Looks like I was successful.

I was all into this description until I realized Mr. Kent would never spend so much money for a lavish second anniversary. Not on a reporter's salary. So my eyes kept rovering over the screen until the end of the segment:


They have been married two years? Where on earth is Clark?!


Hmmm, methinks something really bad happened in Metropolis to make Clark return to the arms of Lana Lang.


Memory lapses? Lex is involved? Most of all Perry cannot remember why he did not attend Lois' wedding? Oh baby! This sounds like a very cool opening to a great story. Glad to know you are posting twice a week! Looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

Ha! I'll be honest, I didn't even consider that. Kudos for finding this unintentional clue!

See, I was thinking that even people totally unfamiliar with LnC would be surprised to read that as well.

And I really enjoyed writing it! I got stuck every now and then, but this opening flowed onto the page with little help from me (though it did require much polishing).

Me too!

Thanks for the feedback, its great getting a peek at what readers are thinking while reading!