Hello, please let me know what you think!

Yay E! Huge congrats on your first published solo story.

I love it, by the way. Lois feeling the space under Clark’s butt is hilarious. Well done!

Thank you, and thank you!

My muse just kind of poured it out all at once, and I had a lot of fun with it!

I loved that. I like how she found out and how tired he was. It was pretty funny at the end to how forceful she was with him about telling him to take a nap. Great work.

Thanks Carrie, glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you for a Lois that is an adult woman, not a petulant two year old child. Oh,there will be sweet revenge, but nothing like a good cup of coffee first.
A fun, sexy,enjoyable read.

Thanks SJH! I had some fun writing her. I was hoping she came across as 'angry but not temper-tantrum' and it sounds like it worked

Coffee and revenge go great together! (er, or so I hear)

E,

You posted your first solo fic. And it's a waffy and revelation fic.

I love it! Nicely done. Very cute and I love that Lois had enough sense to see he was in dire need of sleep and made him go take a nap.

I'm sure she will have a few choice words for him later but for now listen to Lois.

Thanks Val!

You caught me, I love reveal fics with an undying passion

And of course she wants him to take a nap first, what good is it to take a strip off the hide of a man who's too exhausted to fully appreciate the experience? (I almost said 'enjoy' but that's not the right word at all)

That ending was adorable! "Don't need a nap" indeed, petulant Clark was just the cherry on top for this. Also a hilarious way for Lois to find out the secret. In fact, it kind of has me wondering how it never happened before. o_O

hehe, thanks! I'm glad you liked the ending, tired sulky Clark was a fun mental image

As far as how it hadn't happened before, I'm just going to assume that Lady Lucky decided it was time for Lois to know and blipped off to Vegas to blow on some other guy's dice

That was so much fun! I love how she's forcing him to take a nap. That has me laughing SO hard right now. Great work! And congrats on your first solo story. You do have more for us, yes???

(Is in awe of Lois' self restraint not to touch anything when feeling the space between his butt and seat.)

Thanks Vicki, I'm so glad you liked it! Clark definitely wasn't making his own best choices, so somone needed to step up and do it for him. He's lucky he didn't get put in Time Out and sent for a nap! lol

I do have more! Feli and I still have more chapters to post for City of (Fallen) Angels and I have another, longer story that I'm working on on my own (plus a hutch full of plot bunnies nibbling at my heels)

Thanks for reading!

(Dumps a ton of carrots into the hutch. Carrots laced with sugar...)

Hey now, I don't need that sort of "assistance"! Shoo! lol

*hurriedly puts up a Vicki-proof fence around the hutch*

(Sends in the drones)

What a fun story. And just the right length for me these days. (I'm extra-busy with work, and an occasional super-short is about all I have time to read.)

I especially appreciated the whirlwind lines.

I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

Joy,
Lynn

E! You posted a solo fic?!!!!

I loved it! Lois feeling the space between his butt and the seat had me rolling. And petulant Clark not wanting to nap was adorable. I loved how Lois reacted most of all, feeling upset but still reasonable.

Wonderful story! Great job, and I can't wait for more from you! Keep those bunnies nice and fed!

Yup, that sounds like our favorite couple!

Thank you Lynn, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Hey Mouse! I did, I did! I was up way, way too late the other night, and it just sort of all poured out lol

Lois feeling around looking for some objective reality under Clark's butt had me snickering too and petulant Clark just sort of happened, but seems to have worked so yay!

I'm keeping the bunnies nicely fed and taking them out periodically so my muse can pet them in the hope that she'll pick a favorite and start feeding it!

Thanks for the fdk!

Thanks Morgana!

Congratulations on your first solo story! Looking forward to more from you.


Yay Lois!

Very well done!

Thank you Cuidadora!

That was so cute and super funny ending.

Thanks Jackie, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Awe, this was great. Poor Clark, so tired he's floating. But awesome Lois for being so understanding. I enjoyed your fic, endelda!

Thanks PuffyTiger, I'm glad you liked it! That poor sleepy boy scout lol

Hi Endelda!

Congratulations to posting your first!

LOIS: Bah, I can do three days without sleep, too. Just ask anyone at the Planet about that time two years ago. I even got a Kerth award for the story.
EVERYONE:

CLARK: What? Not *every* man finds cathouses to be interesting.

She going to hurt herself?

Oops?

So, pre- or post-PML?

Wouldn’t it have been embarrassing if he had floated back down and she’d practically grabbed a hold of his rear side?

CLARK:

So, he just spilled the beens on his secret, huh? Wonder how she’s going to take it.

LOIS: You told *Trask* that you love me?

So, she’s giving the story to Cat, isn’t she? Should have done that in the first place. Also, “Old McDonald had a farm…” huh?

Let’s hope she’s good at mothering his 8-y/o self. Maybe she could call Martha and ask for advice on how to bset pull down his britches if he keeps being petulant…

Adorable revelation!

Michael

Hi Michael, pleased to meet you! Thank you! (I was really nervous, but Feli made me do it)

Lois on three days without sleep is truly a terrifying thought!


I've tried, but I can't imagine Clark being interested in a cathouse beyond his teen years, unless we're talking about the animal shelter.


Honestly I hadn't even thought about PML but the possibilities are intriguing either way! Will she skin him for that SuperSmooch now that she knows the truth? Will she still be punishing him for his accidental revelation and will just add fuel to the fire? Hmm, this may bear looking into...


You have no idea how close that came to happening

Oh yes, beans everywhere.

Thank you, this made me giggle when I was writing it too


I can see it now!
Lois: Hi Martha, it's me. What's the best way to get your SuperSon's britches down when he's misbehaving?
Martha: FINALLY!!


Thank you sir!

Hi Endelda,

Glad you took the jump. We've got a really nice pool here

We can never have too many PML adaptions!




CLARK: MOOOOOM!

Michael