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Posted By: Deadly Chakram FDK: A New Dawn (9/18) - 08/03/18 04:59 AM
What? You didn't think I was gonna play nice, didya? devil
Posted By: elizabeth Re: FDK: A New Dawn (9/18) - 08/05/18 11:05 PM
Wow! I didn't see that coming. You are a very talented writer, you had me glued to my screen reading that chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next. Very much enjoying the story, thanks for writing and posting it. Cheers!
Posted By: folc4evernaday Re: FDK: A New Dawn (9/18) - 08/06/18 05:04 PM
**bites tongue** Play nice? bwahahaha You??? lol

This was a perfect scene to lay out another excuse for our hero to not tell his heroine of the secret he's been hiding.

I can hear the funeral procession playing now....

Something something You low life something something No good rotten liar something something...

Chen needs a swift kick down a flight of stairs made of legos.

That is all! smile
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: A New Dawn (9/18) - 08/07/18 04:22 AM
Originally Posted by elizabeth
Wow! I didn't see that coming. You are a very talented writer, you had me glued to my screen reading that chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next. Very much enjoying the story, thanks for writing and posting it. Cheers!

blush Awww, thanks! Glad you're enjoying the tale. It was more fun than I imagined it would be, getting to write such an angry Chen.
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: A New Dawn (9/18) - 08/07/18 04:25 AM
Originally Posted by folc4evernaday
**bites tongue** Play nice? bwahahaha You??? lol

This was a perfect scene to lay out another excuse for our hero to not tell his heroine of the secret he's been hiding.

I can hear the funeral procession playing now....

Something something You low life something something No good rotten liar something something...

Chen needs a swift kick down a flight of stairs made of legos.

That is all! smile

Hahaha, but of course! Only the BEST torture for Chen! Still...I liked writing him so angry. It was fun! (Clark: grumbles how it wasn't fun for HIM)

Of course I love throwing obstacles in L&C's way. What good are characters if you can't torture them every now and again? (Clark: grumbles about the torture of the current fic he's in the middle of suffering through)

Posted By: Lady Loisette Re: FDK: A New Dawn (9/18) - 08/09/18 05:56 PM
Yay for Mina, but I still like Chen.

Looking forward to the next chapter. smile
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: A New Dawn (9/18) - 08/10/18 02:47 AM
Originally Posted by Lady Loisette
Yay for Mina, but I still like Chen.

Looking forward to the next chapter. smile


Haha, you may the only one left still liking Chen. wink

New chapter coming up soon! Thanks for reading. smile
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: A New Dawn (9/18) - 10/07/18 11:27 PM
Chen as a young man was a refreshing character to read about. I understand his disappointment, but to go after Clark like that is inexcusable. There is a serious backstory here.
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: A New Dawn (9/18) - 10/08/18 05:09 AM
Originally Posted by Morgana
Chen as a young man was a refreshing character to read about. I understand his disappointment, but to go after Clark like that is inexcusable. There is a serious backstory here.

Not that I condone Chen's actions, but I'd have a hard time not feeling bitter about a best friend who drops off the face of the Earth too. He's also got his own demons from being an orphan, so that plays into it to. His manifests as anger, Clark's as his fear of abandonment.
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