So, if you recall there were some loose ends left on one of my shorter fics. "In Too Deep"

Thanks to some prodding and hilarious convos and not enough caffeine a seed was planted for this one. This is just for fits and giggles. I hope you all enjoy it. Thanks again to Mouserocks and Endelda for the idea.

Story is here



All comments are welcome. Hope you all enjoy and for those of you in the US have a safe 4th of July.

Yay! You posted! I loved it!

Awwwwwwww. So sweet. Warms my heart right from the start.

Haha, love that she can read his face so we'll, although he's probably not doing much to hide it.

Haha, yeah! Scram, Dan, you homewrecker you!

smart boy.

Love how vague you played it. We're used to seeing her mad about the revelation, so this is a nice change of pace. Plus the detail of the despair in his eyes is great. *Pats Clark on the head* There, there. She doesn't want the out, it'll be fine.

So sad and sweet that that moment stays with her so strongly, that she still doesn't like thinking about it.

Her timing is impeccable. Beat him to the punch, right when he was about to spill all.


perfect! I loved it! The ending leaving off here leaves it so light and funny. Great job!

Hahahahaha that was awesome!!!

I don’t know which I liked more- Lois shutting Dan down so thoroughly, the waffiness, or the revelation at the end.

Hi Valerie!

So, a sequel to In Too Deep?.../checks FDK/ Huh, who’d have thunk?

That’s great!

Isn’t it interesting how it was the same with Superman’s eyes, just a few months earlier?
LOIS: Hey, are you calling me fickle?
CLARK:





That was lots of fun! Now I wonder how long she had known? And did she dump Dan before or after she figured it out?

CLARK: Great, here come the doubts…

And what if Clark hadn’t opened up and she had known and chosen Dan. Well…kinda chosen him, the way she did on the show.

CLARK: Now that’s just mean!

Michael

What a lovely little story, and a great ending! Looks like I'll have to go and read In Too Deep now as well.

Hahaha that was great! Well done!

I did promise WAFFY!


Yeah, she needs to rescue Clark before he throttles Dan.


Nobody wants you here, Danny boy!


Yes, even Superman has to take his time when cooking red meat.


Thanks. She's processing a lot of things here. His admission from that morning, her recent uncovering of the revelation, and her own feelings. It's a lot to digest.


She broke his heart so completely and thorougly and that was a turning point for both of them. It'd make sense it still pops up in her mind.


That's all she needed. A hint that he was going to tell her.


Thanks Mouse! Glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks for reading and helping plant the idea with the bantering.


Aw, thanks NK! Glad you enjoyed the shut down of Dan and the comical revelation.

Do not squash Scardino like the bug he is. Do not squash Scardino like the bug he is.


Shhh... no planting ideas like that in poor Clark's head.


Whoops!


See, there's a ton of ways you could go. I like to think that she figured it out that morning. But who knows? Now you get to play with it and have a good laugh. The lovely world of waffy endings and deer in headlights expressions.


Thanks for stopping by and reading. Glad you enjoyed this one.


Glad I could give you a good laugh, jackiek!

Now that’s my idea of a wrecking ball! Lois jumped into the deep end with the proper effect on Clark!

Hence the title, Morgana! I'm glad you enjoyed the twist.

Flabbergasted, then
Loooooooooove it! Lois is the BEST and you have FABULOUS comedy timing.

LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed a comedic relief that I felt was needed. Revelations gone wrong can be angsty but I figured a little comedy couldn't hurt.