FDK: A New Dawn (2/18) - 06/14/18 04:20 AM
A little early posting, but it's going to be a busy weekend here. Better safe than getting caught up in things and not getting a chance to post.
Re: FDK: A New Dawn (2/18) - 06/14/18 05:17 AM
Poor Clark, so scared to lose Lois.
I love their relationship and how you've built it, and I can't wait to see it bloom even further (after the explosion, of course, hehe).
And Jack! Oh, I'm so excited to see the dynamic between him and this Clark!
Thanks for writing!
I love their relationship and how you've built it, and I can't wait to see it bloom even further (after the explosion, of course, hehe).
And Jack! Oh, I'm so excited to see the dynamic between him and this Clark!
Thanks for writing!
Re: FDK: A New Dawn (2/18) - 06/14/18 05:25 AM
Originally Posted by Endelda
Poor Clark, so scared to lose Lois.
I love their relationship and how you've built it, and I can't wait to see it bloom even further (after the explosion, of course, hehe).
And Jack! Oh, I'm so excited to see the dynamic between him and this Clark!
Thanks for writing!
I love their relationship and how you've built it, and I can't wait to see it bloom even further (after the explosion, of course, hehe).
And Jack! Oh, I'm so excited to see the dynamic between him and this Clark!
Thanks for writing!
Thanks for reading!
If anything, this Clark is much more equipped to deal with Jack, having been in the kid's shoes before. But it'll be hard on Clark, you can bet on that.
(Of course, because I like to be evil to my characters.) This Clark is way more scared of Lois' reaction than canon Clark ever was. In a way, he's got a lot more to lose, if she takes it badly. He doesn't have his parents to fly off to while he licks his wounds. Thread carefully, Clark!
Re: FDK: A New Dawn (2/18) - 06/18/18 06:13 AM
Lois and Clark are looking for Jack! I'm excited to meet him.
Looking forward to the next part.
Looking forward to the next part.
Re: FDK: A New Dawn (2/18) - 06/19/18 03:38 AM
Originally Posted by Lady Loisette
Lois and Clark are looking for Jack! I'm excited to meet him.
Looking forward to the next part.
Looking forward to the next part.
Thank you! Jack will be here shortly!
Re: FDK: A New Dawn (2/18) - 08/24/18 06:22 PM
Ten months? TEN months?!
Okay, had to get that out of the way. You paint his fear of abandonment and pain so well that it actually physically hurts. On the one hand, I can't believe that he'd wait so long to tell her because they've already traded I-love-yous and everything, but on the other I absolutely do believe it. Your characterization is so on point with this story. Clark has always been hesitant to tell Lois his secret, even in canon, so of course a Clark who's been hurt and abandoned over and over again by people who he thought loved him is going to have an even harder time telling her the truth.
Although I'm not gonna lie, how fun would it have been to have Clark just blurt it out in the elevator and walk out like nothing happened?!
Not in character, but funny.
Can't wait to keep reading! Another great chapter as usual!
Okay, had to get that out of the way. You paint his fear of abandonment and pain so well that it actually physically hurts. On the one hand, I can't believe that he'd wait so long to tell her because they've already traded I-love-yous and everything, but on the other I absolutely do believe it. Your characterization is so on point with this story. Clark has always been hesitant to tell Lois his secret, even in canon, so of course a Clark who's been hurt and abandoned over and over again by people who he thought loved him is going to have an even harder time telling her the truth.
Although I'm not gonna lie, how fun would it have been to have Clark just blurt it out in the elevator and walk out like nothing happened?!
Not in character, but funny. Can't wait to keep reading! Another great chapter as usual!
Re: FDK: A New Dawn (2/18) - 08/28/18 04:58 AM
Originally Posted by Mouserocks
Ten months? TEN months?!
Okay, had to get that out of the way. You paint his fear of abandonment and pain so well that it actually physically hurts. On the one hand, I can't believe that he'd wait so long to tell her because they've already traded I-love-yous and everything, but on the other I absolutely do believe it. Your characterization is so on point with this story. Clark has always been hesitant to tell Lois his secret, even in canon, so of course a Clark who's been hurt and abandoned over and over again by people who he thought loved him is going to have an even harder time telling her the truth.
Although I'm not gonna lie, how fun would it have been to have Clark just blurt it out in the elevator and walk out like nothing happened?! Not in character, but funny.
Can't wait to keep reading! Another great chapter as usual!
Okay, had to get that out of the way. You paint his fear of abandonment and pain so well that it actually physically hurts. On the one hand, I can't believe that he'd wait so long to tell her because they've already traded I-love-yous and everything, but on the other I absolutely do believe it. Your characterization is so on point with this story. Clark has always been hesitant to tell Lois his secret, even in canon, so of course a Clark who's been hurt and abandoned over and over again by people who he thought loved him is going to have an even harder time telling her the truth.
Although I'm not gonna lie, how fun would it have been to have Clark just blurt it out in the elevator and walk out like nothing happened?!
Not in character, but funny. Can't wait to keep reading! Another great chapter as usual!
Clark's in trou-ble!
I'm glad you like the way I've tortured Clark here. And that you like how Clark is so hesitant to tell Lois. Granted, some of his problems are his own making - he didn't *have* to run away from the halfway house.
Your elevator scenario is hysterical though!