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Posted By: CarrieRene FDK: If You Only Knew 2/15 - 07/26/17 12:26 AM
This chapter was fun to write and once again thank you to folc4evernaday for all of the help.

Thank you for all of the feedback and the welcome to this place.
Posted By: folc4evernaday Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 2/15 - 07/26/17 03:02 PM
You're welcome. Glad I could help map everything out with you. smile
Posted By: jackiek Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 2/15 - 07/26/17 07:13 PM
What a sad chapter. Clark feeling horribly guilty and not letting Lois in. Well done!
Posted By: CarrieRene Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 2/15 - 07/26/17 09:18 PM
Originally Posted by jackiek
What a sad chapter. Clark feeling horribly guilty and not letting Lois in. Well done!

Thank you for the feedback. It is going to get sadder before it gets better. I had quite a bit of help on this chapter.

I am hoping to have another chapter this time next week or sooner if I have time. I am working on two stories at once and I like to post each story at least once a week.
Posted By: chickberry Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 2/15 - 07/28/17 05:54 AM
How much of a lunkhead will Clark be before someone knocks some sense into him? At least I see season three Lois fighting for them where as a season one or two may not have.
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 2/15 - 08/01/17 12:04 AM
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‘Sell the farm?’


No. He couldn’t let that happen. He would do everything he could to make sure the family farm –his dad’s legacy-- stayed in the family. No matter what it took, he wouldn’t let his family lose everything.

Drat that pesky super-hearing!

As always, Martha is as always a realist.
Posted By: CarrieRene Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 2/15 - 08/01/17 12:12 AM
Originally Posted by chickberry
How much of a lunkhead will Clark be before someone knocks some sense into him? At least I see season three Lois fighting for them where as a season one or two may not have.

Yes, how much of a lunkhead will Clark be. Let's count the ways.

Originally Posted by Morgana
‘Sell the farm?’Drat that pesky super-hearing!

As always, Martha is as always a realist.


Yes, she is the realist. She is going to end up talking to him eventually.
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