Hey!! Sorry for the confusion about how many parts I will post... I am going to post longer parts after this, and have 5 altogether. I'll post one-a-day

Thank you for the comments from part one!!

More more more I don't want to be left hanging in the balance!

Great part Nicole!

Lois guess as to the talk is very believable and I can't wait to see her venting to her diary once Clark has that talk with her.

The part with Martha was very sweet and I love the way Lois is willing to accept the way the Kent family does things without any question but still, with a nice dose of curiosity. They're just lucky she's so excited and happy that she can't concentrate on investigating.

Looking forward to tomorrow,
Avia

I think it's really sweet that Lois expects a proposal... and that she plans to say yes! Hope she's not too upset when (I assume) it's not a proposal at all -- Clark is clearly scared out of his mind.

Poor baby. But I have faith in you, Nicole

PJ

Cute part. Can't wait for Lois to find out the truth.

Hey, all

Stay w/ me... the "talk" is coming up soon (Although, I get the feeling that some of you sense what it's going to be about... )

Thanks for the replies... the next part is going to be a lot longer than the last two have been and I will get it out tonight

~Nicole

Absolutely adoring it

I'm hooked. Poor Clark. Lois is all setup for a proposal! Uh Oh things could go badly. Looking forward to more. Laura

Great part

I am on my way to read part 3.....


karla

OOOOOoo I can't stop reading!

Tsc tsc.. the news inst good...

Awww.. poor, Clark.

idiot :rolleyes:


Good luck, Lois. though i personally think you will have a bigger surprise.

ARGH... heading to next part, avidly.