To all you people who wanted a sequel.... I hope you're happy now Personally, I blame Sara Kraft.

Thanks, Wendy, for doing a quick beta job last night

PJ

I firmly believed this sequel was not needed. Absolutely, positively, in no way necessary, because the first was so unique, how could you match it?

And was I ever wrong!! Loved this, loved this, loved this. Did I mention the love?

Most of all:

Wonderful.

And the observation about how much he enjoyed waiting in line at the restaurant. Not something you would ever do once you're super famous.

Well. Now that you've written the perfect sequel, I'm thinking it would be nice if you just expanded this to about...20 parts. Ok?

What if I say 'Please'?

CC

Rats, CC, I was going to highlight that line, too - most definitely my favourite.

This was great, Pam - just as good as the first. Clark had a nice mix of uncertainty, humour and just enough confidence to kiss the girl at the end. Perfect.

Yvonne

I was going to highlight that line, too.. guess it's a favorite

Absolutely wonderful. I wasn't expecting to see a sequel, but I'm SO glad there was. Are you going to continue with this? Cause, you know, I'd love to see Lois come back to Metropolis as herself.

Pam, I totally agree with everything everyone has said (loved that "answering machine"!!!)

You're in for a total ALt-Clark Alt-Lois fic now. You just can't stop now.

That was chapter 2 of 20? 25? parts.

Wonderful!

Hi

Pam, I agree too with everything everyone has said loved that "answering machine"

And now that you are writing more, ejenmm, please write other 20 or 25 parts, hehehehe, pleaseeeeeeeeee

Great, great,great,great

Karla

I wanted to pop that kid.

I think everybody's favourite line was the answering machine one. Just inspired!

Like others, I didn't think the original needed a sequel, Pam - but then you came along and wrote one which was just perfect. And thank you for showing it to me last night - it was just what I needed at the time.

What do I love about it? Well, the humour throughout is terrific. Love Clark's self-deprecating air and Lois's not-so-subtle management of him. And the kiss, of course. And, most of all, the delicious symmetry of both of them being in disguise.

Totally adorable!


Wendy

Yep, the answering machine was my favorite, too. So now do he and Lois keep their Lyn and Joe disguises when they want to go out together? That would make a neat secret identity for him when he doesn't want to be Clark .

Anyway, nice job. Now you see how easy it is to get hooked into sequels.

Nan

Speaking of sequels, Nan... I was re-reading Supercop yesterday for Kerth purposes and wondered what progress you've made on the promised sequel to that...

(Sorry to hijack your thread, Pam )


Wendy

Also with apologies to Pam, Right now I'm working on Home V and working on details to the sequel to Suspicions. Supercop is going to have to wait in line. <g>

Nan

WOO HOO!!! We got a sequel! Hehehe.
Looooved the story pam! And the answering machine part cracked me up. I can go to work happy now. YAY!

Rach

Loverly!

I like when Lois er..Lyn bosses him around and he doesn't even realize it. Nice work!

And a smoochie at the end?? Clark's not the only one with a grin on

~Liz

Just caught up with these two stories, and all I have to say is .

That would be me melting into a happy puddle about now! I really enjoyed them both!

Jen

*Ahem* Excuse me?! I don't even recall being the first to mention a sequel! *How* can *I* be blamed for this?!

/me huffs off to pout...

I shouldn't even leave feedback.

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Fine! Fine! I'll leave feedback. ;P

Awww, sweet theory.

AWWWWWW

Awwww!!!

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I'm another one who didn't expect a sequel because the first story was such a perfect little package. But you managed to make an equally perfect, complete partner for it, and when I finished, I wasn't left starving for more. I felt ... satisfied. I had needed to see Clark's hope, not only for the love he's been waiting for, but for a possibility of something like a normal life at times, and you gave it to me. Seeing both L&C from the inside, I'm confident that they'll be okay, so, thanks.

Everything I want to say has been said.
Basically:
- I didn't think a sequel was necessary...
- ...yet, I loved this second story...
- ...and now I think I wouldn't mind a third either.
- I loved the answering machine line
- ...and the ending was awesome.

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

Pam

WOW, this is excellent. I love it.

Tricia

I, too, didn't think it needed a sequel but who am I to complain if Pam wants to write more?

My favorite sentence in this story isn't the same one others thought, but rather is this one:

I thought this was great since it further reinforces why the disguise works, just like nobody in our universe expected Superman to "dress down."

And you took my suggestion and even paraphrased my sig! Cool.

Keep 'em coming.

P.S. I'm sure Lynn M. wouldn't complain too much if you added another 'n' to Lois's disguised name.

Ditto.





What? Everyone already said what I wanted to -- picked out my favorite line; commented that it hadn't needed a sequel, but this was wonderful . . . All that's left is for me to echo everyone.

And do my best to post first, next time.

Yep, lovely little sequel, although I prefer the first fic as a standalone. And yes, all my favorite lines have already been quoted. Except for "pumpkin." He's never going to get away with that twice.

Hazel

Yeah. What they said.

Sherry

Add about 80 more chapters and make this an epic. More to be told, and you tell so well!!!!

But grudgingly agree that it's okay to leave it at this too... if you want to... I guess...

If this were a series, I'd be posting it to my schedule.

TEEEEEEEEJ

Wow, again -- thanks for the responses, FOLCs

Yeah, CC, that was my position, too, but then those darned ideas started pestering me again...

I'm really tickled everybody liked the answering machine line

Thanks, y'all

PJ

Wonderful next installment...how about some more?

I mean, the options are endless...

James

wow what more can I add to this praise? It was adorable, wonderful, sweet, cute, nice, waffy and I loved it. Laura

Oh wow, what a sweet, waffy, cute PERFECT sequel to such a wonderful story!! I love that he knew it was her! Because now I'm reading the first story again, knowing that and it makes that take on new meaning and makes it just a little more wonderful!!

Very nice!!

Hi,

Great story.

Ya know, I keep reading stories where Alt Lois doesn't like Alt Clark. I wonder why not. But HERE, HERE we see the REAL Lois, the one she is really deep down inside. She falls for Superman when she sees him on tv the first time. Just like our Lois does. Only she gets to go for the guy at his office cos she already knows who he is. It sure saves a lot of time and angst. My kind of story!

I think if I just pasted every sentence as my favorite line, it would suffice, don't you think?

Excellent sequel. I'll just keep checking the boards to see part three when it arrives!

No big revelations of course, but all the waffy fluffy LnC stuff we all love. And the little girl recognizing him



Michael