FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) - 12/24/04 06:03 AM
He's spolied 
Nice ending
Jose
Nice ending
Jose
Re: FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) - 12/24/04 08:08 AM
It made sense 
, the child of divorced parents will use the absent parent as a weapon if so allowed. And only Clark would see his loving Lois as the negative that pushed her away. 
Of course it wasn't his fault that she was all messed up but it's logical that he'd decide to shoulder part of the blame.
Normally I wouldn't like his moving back in like that except this is L&C and they're gonna get back together , otherwise I'd say it would be hard on the child if they failed.
It was a good story. I liked it. Hopefully someday you'll do a sequel to let us know how they ended up.
, the child of divorced parents will use the absent parent as a weapon if so allowed. And only Clark would see his loving Lois as the negative that pushed her away. Of course it wasn't his fault that she was all messed up but it's logical that he'd decide to shoulder part of the blame. Normally I wouldn't like his moving back in like that except this is L&C and they're gonna get back together
, otherwise I'd say it would be hard on the child if they failed. It was a good story. I liked it. Hopefully someday you'll do a sequel to let us know how they ended up.
Re: FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) - 12/24/04 06:02 PM
Hi,
Beautiful story.
Beautiful story.
Re: FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) - 12/26/04 06:12 PM
Anna
A lovely ending! I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Tricia
A lovely ending!
I thoroughly enjoyed it.Tricia
Re: FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) - 12/27/04 12:29 AM
I had my doubts earlier, but I was very satisfied with the way they solved the things between them:
Only, if Jon hadn't supergenes, I would fear that he would grow fat.
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“Of course! I asked you to marry me right after you found out that your fiancé was a criminal, when your life was upside down. How could I expect everything would be fine? You needed to find yourself first, and I didn’t realize it was a quest you had to go on alone. I should have given you some time to believe in love again. In the true love like the one I wanted to give you.”
“I always believed in your love.”
“You don’t now.”
“But after all of this...”
“See? I never gave you a chance to understand that you could do nothing that would kill my love for you.”
“But... I disappointed you! I’m sure you never expected that you’d have to carry all the weight of our relationship on your shoulders!”
“I was disappointed, but it wasn’t your fault. No one loved you like you deserved. No one but me. Which is why my love became a burden for you.”
“I always believed in your love.”
“You don’t now.”
“But after all of this...”
“See? I never gave you a chance to understand that you could do nothing that would kill my love for you.”
“But... I disappointed you! I’m sure you never expected that you’d have to carry all the weight of our relationship on your shoulders!”
“I was disappointed, but it wasn’t your fault. No one loved you like you deserved. No one but me. Which is why my love became a burden for you.”
Re: FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) - 12/29/04 06:42 AM
Thank you for the comments, FoLCs!
See ya,
AnnaBtG.
See ya,
AnnaBtG.
Re: FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) - 12/29/04 04:44 PM
Yeah... just call me bad BR! Sorry I haven't commented throughout like I'd planned, Anna.
I've already told you but I just wanted to say it again. I'm really proud and wowed by how you took the original story and improved it so greatly!!!! (Not to mention how wonderfully in stride you handled the debate in the original fdk folders! ) You have a terrific command of the English language for it not being your native tongue (well even for a native speaker ) and I envy your linguistic range and abilities. You really created a great sense of angst and emotion in this story... two qualities that I adore when reading. And now... you have no excuse not to write introspection! 
I can't wait to see your next story!!
Sara
Sorry I haven't commented throughout like I'd planned, Anna.I've already told you but I just wanted to say it again. I'm really proud and wowed by how you took the original story and improved it so greatly!!!! (Not to mention how wonderfully in stride you handled the debate in the original fdk folders!
) You have a terrific command of the English language for it not being your native tongue (well even for a native speaker ) and I envy your linguistic range and abilities. You really created a great sense of angst and emotion in this story... two qualities that I adore when reading. And now... you have no excuse not to write introspection! I can't wait to see your next story!!
Sara
Re: FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) - 01/04/05 04:51 PM
I really liked the end!!!!
Well done!!!
Karla
Well done!!!
Karla