AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW............

I'm a gooey mess..

Nice job Laura!

~Liz

Really cool, Laura..

I believe now when you say you have a talent for WAFFYs...

Keep up!

Beautiful!

Beautiful, Laura. You've really captured the emotional tension between the two.

And you're probably right about Gilbert.<g>

cc m

Awwww! That was so sweet!

I like your version of what Clark says much better than the original! And, of course, the kiss... Go, Clark!

Very nice story! Thanks, Laura.

- Vicki

I didn't like the episode "Barbarians at the Planet'. It was too sad. Your version "Barbarians in the Rain' is much better, is more romantic, it has happy end and oh... how sweet! I loved it!

Andreia

Hi,

Cute story.

This was a lovely reading. Nice work, Laura!

I think you're right! If Clark had just kissed her, we'd have seen what you've written here, instead of the way the episode had it.

For a few minutes there, when they both got rained on, and they started talking about Superman, I thought Lois had tumbled to Clark's secret-- what with the wet hair and all... But I forgot, he'd still have had his glasses on.

I'm glad you had Lois go after him, instead of letting him leave.

Nice job!! Feel like writing any more stories?

~Toc

I too totally agree, and Anne of Green Gables is also one of my favourite movies.

Anyway, beautiful take on the episode, beatiful writing. Thumbs up!

That was soooo sweet, and soooo cute!

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

Oh sorry I took so long to respond! Thanks for your comments . I am glad you enjoyed it. It was just a piece of waffy-gooeyness -- just the way I like my stories.

I believe what I said was that I have no talent writing anything other than happy, waffy, kissy scenes. Any attempt at anything heavier, and my mind starts to go crazy.

Oh, good point. I actually hadn't thought about that aspect at all. But, yeah, with the wet hair, maybe he did look a little like Superman. But maybe the hair was more down against his face than smoothed back -- picture Clark in ATAI in the pouring rain.

I really see a lot of parallels between Anne and Gilbert's relationship and Lois and Clark's relationship -- but Lois didn't break any slates over Clark's head .

Anne of Green Gables through Anne of the Island are (by far) my favorites books I've ever read, and the movies are my favorite movies -- ones I can watch over, and over, and over again. And, I mean it when I say that I make people watch the Anne of Green Gables movies with me (and listen to the books on tape when I drive places).

Thanks for all of your wonderful comments. I am glad you liked it .

- Laura