O-ho, the plot thickens! You've filled in the back story quite nicely -- the part about Miranda makes me a touch nervous, but it does explain a lot. And what the heck, there's only one more part, so she can't be *too* upset about things when the pheremone wears off. Can she? And so now, she goes from wanting to tease him about Superman, to realizing how he might react very badly to her knowing. Oh, what a tangled web... and how did she discover him, anyway? I can't remember if you've covered that yet or not.

Roll on part 3!

PJ

Hey Pam,

If you re-read part 1, you will see that Lois had one eye opened when he sped out of the bedroom dressed as Superman, "confirming her suspicions".

I haven't detailed yet why she was suspicious....perhaps that will come out in the final part 3?

Oh, okay, that makes sense As for detailing the reasons why she was suspicious, I'm curious, and I'm certain Clark will want to know!

PJ

Cute story

...that sure explains a lot.

Next part, please,

Julia

Hi,

Great part.

Another fun part! Well done!

I love Lois's actions For some reason, I just love the way you handle her!

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

P.S.:

Does this actually exist? I used it in a composition a couple of weeks ago and my English teacher said that there's no such word

Hmmmm....I'll check it out and let you know! Microsoft Word didn't underline it or anything (you know how annoying that can be when you spell a word wrong).

Checked it out...yeah, it's definitely a word!!

BTW, it's interesting, when you write a fic and do a little research for it, what you can discover! Here's an interesting link to a web site that actually sells pheromones and states that it will elevate your mood, give you more confidence, make you more popular, etc. Apparently you put several drops under your nose, above your lips and you are instantly charismatic!!!

I've always said that since I started reading comics I've learned alot about science, and 40+ years later, it's still true!!

Pheromone, my lovely...indeed!

web page for pheromones

Great stuff. I needed a small romantic chuckle this morning, just tore my way through parts one and two, and loved it.

I guess I'll have to break down and register at the nfic forum.

Yvette

I'm enjoying this! Now give us part3! We need part 3!!!!!

QotC---Who is too young to register for nfic, but is very mature for her age. Really. Honest, that wasn't *me* throwing a tantrum in the mall yesterday; it was---um...my clone! Yeah, that's it! My clone!

Too bad classes are finished... I'd love to tell her so

Thanks, Chris!
See ya,
AnnaBtG.

This is getting even more interesting. I can't wait to see what Lois's reaction will be once the pheremones wear off.

Yeah, I agree with the others...need Part 3!!!!!

Caryn