FDK: Beneath the Surface (9/14) - 12/30/13 02:18 PM
I'm not a micro-biologist but I do find genetics fascinating. Science people out there let me know if I made any big mistakes. 
Re: FDK: Beneath the Surface (9/14) - 12/31/13 02:29 PM
Hi, thank you it is nice to have a new part to read, shame it was so short.
I wonder if some DNA are not from Superman. I hope we'll see more of Lois & Clark relationship - Lois questions on Clark's life.
I wonder if some DNA are not from Superman. I hope we'll see more of Lois & Clark relationship - Lois questions on Clark's life.
Re: FDK: Beneath the Surface (9/14) - 12/31/13 03:30 PM
Welcome back!
Apparently Dr. Goldberg is will aware of the damage his 'procedure' is having on these young men. He is not an evil man, I suspect that if he could get out of this mess, he would.
Interesting. Who is their employer? Could his initials be L.L.?
Let's hope there is help for these poor kids!
I look forward to the next installment!
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“None of them expected to die,” Dr. Goldberg protested.
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We’ve just started phase three. My employer would appreciate it if we didn’t have to interrupt it .”
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Lois looked at Clark. She knew this news would eat him alive. Clark had such compassion for life and hearing about what could be happening with these kids was obviously tearing him apart inside. “If you were to see this patient, do you think you could help him?” Lois asked optimistically.
“I’m not sure. I need more time to try to figure out what exactly the CX is. It could be possible that something like dialysis or a transfusion would work. I can’t really say at this point.”
“I’m not sure. I need more time to try to figure out what exactly the CX is. It could be possible that something like dialysis or a transfusion would work. I can’t really say at this point.”
I look forward to the next installment!
Re: FDK: Beneath the Surface (9/14) - 01/08/14 01:18 AM
This was an interesting story. Good to be rid of Linda finally. I am hoping Clark gives in and tells Lois The Secret soon.
Re: FDK: Beneath the Surface (9/14) - 02/09/14 08:53 AM
Will we be getting a new part soon? 
Re: FDK: Beneath the Surface (9/14) - 02/09/14 12:58 PM
Thanks all for reading and being patient with the slowness of these last few chapters. I've had the next one sitting in my inbox ready to post for almost a month 
It will be up today. I'm still trying to finish up the last chapter, but haven't found any time or energy(at over 6 months pregnant) to work on it
I've been trying to spend extra time with my 3 year old since his only child world is about to change. I'm determined to get it done soon though before other plot bunnies can sneak in there and take over. I love the idea of coming up with an evil alt Clark
It's been trying to push it's way in there and demand to be written.