rkn That would mean I could wind up the story quickly
Virginia Interesting thoughts. You're probably right about Kent being a hero, but wouldn't it be nice if he just once looked after himself first? Maybe this will be that story. Or maybe not.
Andreia Great memory for little details!
chelo The river - I've never seen the Congo River, but I know it's very long and hopefully fast flowing.
mrsM It was really pretty confusing.
Yes, it was. I wrote that scene from Clark's POV and he was drifting in and out of consciousness, so it would have been unrealistic for all his memories to be clear and sharp. However, when I wrote the scene, I had no idea it would take nearly a year for me to get back to that line about bodies rotting.
Mouse I like that you can see that Clark thinking about what happened is a step forward. It has to be done if he's going to move on.
Amy Good summary, Amy. I'll try to keep the waiting as short as possible.
Laura Trouble?
John Interesting theories, John. I can't really say much else.
I'll try to post the next part within 24 hours. I'm so close to the end that I haven't wanted to take a break from writing to post the next part.
Corrina.