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Posted By: Female Hawk FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/10/13 07:54 PM
Apologies for the long delay. Thanks to those who are still with me, including my amazing BRs, Iolanthe and Lynn.

Corrina.
Posted By: Christina Re: FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/10/13 08:47 PM
I know I haven't said anything for a while but really enjoying the story!
Posted By: Christina Re: FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/10/13 08:47 PM
Gah, a doublepost!
Posted By: mrsMxyzptlk Re: FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/10/13 09:04 PM
Nooooo!!!!! You can't end it there!
Posted By: John Lambert Re: FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/10/13 10:53 PM
I was glad we got to see Lois and Clark interact some in this part.
Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/11/13 04:13 PM
What's going on with Romeric? I want to believe he's genuinely being nice to Kent (and therefore be one of the stereotypical always nice Bangala), but part of me expects him stab Kent in the back -- literally -- should they team up for hunting. I like the idea of the whole village being quiet on "birthing day". It really makes the village seem more like a cohesive unit working together for the communal good. We'll have to see. I hope Rolle well with the birth of her new child.

I don't know how well Romeric is going to take Kent sleeping in Lois's hut when she isn't there. He's going to suspect a bomoi-marriage without a ceremony which will certainly make him mad.

Poor men having to explain to Diddi about birth. clap I don't envy them.
Posted By: elizabeth Re: FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/11/13 04:16 PM
Fantastic! Another chapter! Lots of tension in this one and what a place to leave us at, you are so good at cliffhangers! smile

Can hardly wait for the next installment. More soon please!! smile
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/11/13 08:20 PM
Cliffhangers are your speciality! Welcome back and thanks for the latest installment.
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/11/13 08:20 PM
Still with you. I hope we get a post sooner. I am liking the story despite the cliff hanger. ;-)
Posted By: Mouserocks Re: FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/13/13 06:19 PM
smile1 Yay! An update!

I loved the scene of Clark and Romaric explaining how babies are born to Diddi. laugh I can just picture the looks on their faces throughout it all, and how Lois would react if they had explained anything about "how the baby got in" laugh

I liked that Lois and Clark had an interaction, and it was very sweet. I hope every works out all right for Rolle and her baby, and I can't wait for another update! No more cliffhangers.... wink (It's okay, I'll take cliffhangers as long as you keep the chapters coming.) smile
Posted By: John Lambert Re: FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/14/13 01:19 PM
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Originally posted by VirginiaR:
What's going on with Romeric? I want to believe he's genuinely being nice to Kent (and therefore be one of the stereotypical always nice Bangala), but part of me expects him stab Kent in the back -- literally -- should they team up for hunting. I like the idea of the whole village being quiet on "birthing day". It really makes the village seem more like a cohesive unit working together for the communal good. We'll have to see. I hope Rolle well with the birth of her new child.

I don't know how well Romeric is going to take Kent sleeping in Lois's hut when she isn't there. He's going to suspect a bomoi-marriage without a ceremony which will certainly make him mad.

Poor men having to explain to Diddi about birth. clap I don't envy them.
But Lois and Kent were both sleeping in the same place while in quarantine. So Clark sleeping in a Lois-free Lois hut seems to be a lower level of closeness.
Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/14/13 01:52 PM
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Originally posted by John Lambert:
But Lois and Kent were both sleeping in the same place while in quarantine. So Clark sleeping in a Lois-free Lois hut seems to be a lower level of closeness.
Okay, true. But I could see Romeric differentiating between Clark sleeping in the same quarantine hut as the medicine woman, who is caring for him... and Clark staying in her HOME without being married to her.
Posted By: KateB Re: FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/14/13 04:47 PM
Oh dear, you left us hanging Corrina. wildguy I hope that Rolle and her baby will be fine and that Romaric is not playing a game with Kent.
Please, post soon. grovel
Posted By: AmyPrime Re: FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/14/13 08:28 PM
That's a very long labor. Scary. You really captured Lois's fear and exhaustion well. And the way the whole village is involved -- it will be devastating if Rolle and the baby aren't okay.
Posted By: chelo Re: FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/20/13 08:21 AM
Oh, come on! You can't leave me like this!
I love all your stories, and this is the first time I'm following your weekly posts, and I have to say: It's excruciating!!! wallbash I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

I loved the part when Didi ask Romaric and Kent about childbirth.... hahaha!

More ASAP!! please!
Posted By: Female Hawk Re: FDK - Once Bitten (29/?) - 08/27/13 07:18 PM
Christina Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

John If I were to add in interaction simply for the sake of interaction, the story would suffer.

Virginia Interesting points.

MrsM, Elizabeth and Morgana Sorry about the cliffy. Resolution soon.

Laura Glad you're still with me.

Mouse The parts will continue to come. It might be slow, but they will keep coming.

Kate You'll hear about Rolle soon.

Amy A first baby can take a long time. No advanced medical help like a C-section, remember.

chelo Reading part by part has both advantages and disadvantages. It's nice to have you 'on board'.

Thanks, everyone.

Corrina.
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