FDK - Cooking Class (6/7) - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Thanks to everyone who has left feedback for this story. Sorry I'm so horribly behind in replying.

I thought you'd want the next part more than my replies.

Corrina.

Oh, that was so sweet. Good work.

Artemis

That Clark managed to convince Lois to let him stay.

It is slightly surprising that she has not focused more on his hearing her cry.

I love the dialogue.

that they are getting to share this meal they worked to make.

Clark should be glad he chose to make kisses now.

Okay you redeemed yourself after having Lois ask Clark to leave. LOVED this part. The mix of sweet and sexy I thought was perfect for the characters. Although I have never known Lois to turn down chocolate before. Maybe they will be chocolate covered Clark kisses ?!? Can't wait for the last (sniff sniff) part.
Sarah

Ooooooooh, I just melted into a puddle of goo, over here. This was wonderful!

Banter.

Good, intelligent and well written old-fashioned banter.

The sign of an intelligent and talented writer.

It was almost like watching a couple through a window that allowed for sight and sound. I was a little embarrassed peeking in on such an intimate dinner.

The description of the meal itself was too divine to be ignored, I was so anxious to take a bite that my mouth was watering. Have you cooked such a dish yourself? Because from the delightfully skillful manner in which the preparations were written, it sounds like this recipe is a family favorite.

Speaking for myself, thank you for letting me attend this cooking lesson!

Last part coming up...sigh.

Delicious and oh so sensual! Yum!

Woah! Clark gets a bit intense, doesn't he? And that doesn't scare Lois off? But I guess he's in love-at-first-sight, and she's extraordinarily impulsive. Besides, Clark just has this trustworthy vibe about him that Lois always falls for.

I totally enjoyed the banter about kisses. I've got quite the chocolate craving now, thanks to you.

Woo-woo! Love this! The flirty banter was great, as was Clark insisting he stay for her. Just perfect! Can't wait to find out what happens next and yet I don't want the story to end...

love this! can't wait for the next part, and a sequel ;-)

Great part, Corrina.

Awwww loved the whole scene More soon. Laura

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Clark's smile flickered. "Actually, I was thinking you should let me choose the woman for me to date."

- Pick me!!! Pick me!!!!

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Clark let her hand slide slowly from his grasp. "I'll be waiting for you," he said.

- AAAAAAAAWWWWWW.......!!!!!

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"You like chocolate?" he asked.
"It's my favourite food."
His smile came with soft satisfaction. "That's good."
Unable to resist, Lois asked, "You're not going to ask if I like kisses?"
Clark cleared his throat. "No," he said. "I'm not going to ask that."
"Pity," she said.
"Would I like the answer?"
"Depends on whether you like kisses or not."

- Teasing, Lois? Wooooooo!!! I see some kisses in your future!!

I Love this couple!!