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I will post Part 30 by Friday, August 10th. Consider this warning to test your seatbelts and safety bars.

Wow, I like how he stood up to Murry. Cat is great in this, and Lois is starting to fall for Clark. I am still with you, and curious to where this is going to go. More soon. Laura

I just love Cat.

Laura: Thank you. I never understood Superman's reasoning in getting into the ring with Tommy Garrison in the canon episode, except for the fact that canon Clark seemed a bit of a boxing nut. (Maybe it's a man/woman thing.) Although, I gave this Clark more of a reason to fight Garrison (him beating up Clark's friend Jimmy), Clark will show more true character, I believe, by keeping himself out of it. Since I had Alt-Clark learning the hard way, with Walt Irig getting possibly hurt because of their fight over Lana on Prom Night, this Clark is even more against fighting humans "for fun" than canon Clark was. Yes, poor Lois is being tempted more by Clark's wicked wiles.

IolantheAlias: I'm glad you're enjoying Cat. She'll be a bigger part of this entire story than Jimmy or Perry, I believe, when all is said and told. I have some fun things planned for her.

Yes, I love Cat in this story: she's a good friend for Clark and a great reporter!

Wonderful! I'm looking forward to these "fun things" now.

Love this line:

Almost three months? Is H. G. due to appear soon?

Glad to hear you have more in store with Cat.

Joan

Sydney: What? Cat wasn't a good reporter in canon? Although often protrayed as clearly not as intelligent as Clark or Lois, she seems to be good at coming in with the goods (especially prostitute renting senators and bribed congressmen). Clark is also good for Cat. It always made me sad that canon Cat didn't have anyone to go to in ASU, when the world was ending. She needed a friend (without benefits) as much as alt-Clark needed one.

Always good when a more minor character brings in the goods.

Hmmm. Yes, what was that 3 month anniversary again? Currently we're at the beginning of August, just under 3 months in. Clark's all packed and ready to head home after his vacation, right?

This spells T R O U B L E to me…





He would even dress up in blue tights for her? So she can make love to her hero?



So, it was the logical reason to choose, then, wasn’t it?

Ooooh! I’ve got an idea. Huh? What? Drat. Okay, nix that idea. It’s already been patented by LexCo. And we all know how messy those patent infringement cases can get… /points at the Apple/Samsung war over the Space Odyssey’s computer tablet/

No, that’s still good. DPC doesn’t protect you from bad guys breaking into the good doctor’s office and stealing your trade secrets.

/points at med-lab Palpatine took Anakin Skywalker/

Marry her and stuff her in a bunker. Not necessarily in that order.

Oooooh!

How about those arms? When folded at the elbow, don’t they look just like an L. And both together, that’s Lex’s Double-L.

Maybe it’s him? Maybe he doesn’t know how to talk to women?



Blue Oyster Bar. On an unrelated subject: I’ve recently re-watched the Police Academy…

Ooooo-kay. Is the south-east Asian stereotype massage therapy with a happy ending tax-deductable as a medical expense?

Boyfriend. Lex does have a lot of male companions running around…

So, he’s suddenly not interested in what Lois does at night?



They have been validating her theories on docking maneuvers.

Oh. Isn’t that what Mindy Church does, too? They could actually be siblings. Or father/daughter?

That’s true, actually. The other half’s about money. Plus, you can exchange one for the other at various rates.



That could have been a bloody mess…

See?

Cigars for everyone! Lois just found out she’s pregnant and wants to get back together.

But he gets to keep the finger?

So she’s assuming he actually looked inside an envelope not meant for him? Who would *do* such a thing? Such a violation of trust and good manners? Oh, right. Duh!

Better than being his monster?

Uumm…

Has he *met* her? And would he also stop her from printing the story if her Dad was Lex Luthor?



Maybe she should yell at him for thinking she’d yell at him?

/points to earlier remark/



/points at headline of Daily Planet during the pheromone incident/

/points at earlier remark/

Just telling, not writing a story, right? It could have been worse.



Oh boy. She really got a defective Clark, didn’t she?



Great. Now the needle has jumped out of the track

Also, it could work great for getting them ladies…

/suggests Lois hand in her original story after all/

What about defiling Superman? She didn’t manage to pull that one off. And she still hasn’t pushed some sweets down Clark’s throat. Although, she hasn’t really applied herself to that one, yet.

“Meesa going home!” Michael

Hi Virginia,

Sorry about the delay in the FDK. I was busy doing a quick beta read for another author.

I had to go back and review to see just where we were.

Pity about Allie Danello. Superman saved him only to lose him still.

Michael: 3-part FDK! The spoilage police..........) Let me go! I promise I won't say anything else!

Even so, they are violating it by stealing the good doctors records and writing a story about it.

Yes, but he won't get a chance to see that movie for some years. It's only 1993 in this dimension.

Among other things.

Unfortunately Lois has the same Double-L initials and it could have been a tribute to her.

Duh!

Unrelated? That reference I would have caught. For some reason, Police Academy jokes stick with me more than Dune plot.

It's still early in the day.

Oooops. Ran out of smilies.

FDK Reply - Part 2



/Canon Dialogue./

Just like the PML issue sold like heart cakes.

Oh, dear, I'm getting predictable. time-machines./

No, that one he'd do for free.



Large donations to Goodwill.

But then wouldn't he be admitting to being the money behind them?

I hope it was an entertaining read. I've got some catching up to do of my own.

Well, I did come up with this whole sub-plot of actually keeping Allie alive and hiding him out with Lois first and then Clark, but then I figured, didn't we just do that with Alan Morris (Mr. Invisible) and I wanted to move on to the end of Requiem and get on more fun plot points. So, you can thank the Invisible Man for cutting a good five parts out of my story, but I'll keep it in reserves in case I ever want to revisit Requiem (in other words, I hit a VERY dry spell).

Yes. Copy is much more critical when it comes to touching

/points at little bits of information hidden between the lines.



Oh. Oooooooooh…

/imagines intricate flight plan that looks like a giant flower with Lois’s bedroom being at the flower’s hub.



Camera ran out of film before the good part started.

Ooooh! Right. What was her name again? Oh, right. Baby Gunderson.

Michael

Well, I thank you for the extra effort.

Hmmm. Did we have a rule on 'you're allowed to touch Lois as long as you don't touch her copy'?

Of course, my stories would be much more bland without them. Sometimes the double speak is intentional.

First of all... I tried to run away from the D.E. and ran into another one. Unless Cat scores, it's a big, fat miss on Cat's scale.

Gee, I wonder what I should do about that.

No, I mean he makes big donations to Goodwill, so they don't stay at his apartment.

Do you mean the former would happen if Superman used his super strength to hit a cyborg and accidently killed him? Thereby guilty of killing and sent to jail? Yeah, I'm thinking that would be the one Lex would chose. The other thing he can fix with a PR blitz.

Goood question. I think…no. Lois didn’t remark on it in the Lois Rules vigi by some author…

Michael

It's now officially Rule 102.

Hmmmm. <<thinking>> what if she helped him take it off?

I caught the reference to Bob's The Pub. That would be funny, if Lois said the gold ones were her's.

Step one: pick up mail. Step two: read mail. Step three: answer mail. Step four: pass copies of all death threats of Lois to MPD. Step five: discard extra materials, including photos and used underwear. :p Step six: wash hands.

Michael

Okay, I’m back for real this time. I was supposed to be back Tuesday but my sister called and asked if I could go with her kids to Cedar Point. And yesterday I had to paint my bathroom, which took longer than I thought it would. But it looks great and now I have nothing to do but review!

Put down the pictures if you want to live.

Finally a chance for Clark?



He wouldn’t have left, would he? Don’t give up yet!

Go with you instinct! It’s always Luthor!



I told you so.





That’s a good question. Which Lois will probably not answer…

Wow, all that from “3 months”?

Good for you! Finally sticking up for yourself!

X Phile: Are you going to have to join the Evil Writer Monster FDK club? Hope you had a great trip!

over Superman.

He's trying not to jump to that obvious conclusion every time there's a big-bucks baddy on scene. It tends to lose him his bias-free reporter badge.

As a good reporter, she knows which questions are the best ones not to answer.



Supes is good for sticking up for himself with everyone, but Lois.

I think in the fourth paragraaph of this section it should read "He was the man she called when he was depressed about Allie’s death" one of the shes is mistakenly a he.

Thanks. Somehow my pronouns always get messed up in the speed of transcription.

I think this should be "because of a".

The sentance "This was clear case of robotics" should either say "clearly" or "a clear case".

It is interesting to note that Clark still does not think of this as his dimension as this point, although he seems to have no desire to leave.

I am pretty sure that Clark would say "the Daily Planet". It just does not seem to work without "the" before it.

I am not sure that "who" is the best word here. It has as its antecedent "her article", so I think probably that or which would be a better pronoun.

"attending an any event" does not need an. I half wonder if you meant "at", but I think it would sound better just "attending any event".

Oops. There's another one. Thanks.

Yes. Thanks, again.

It's still early yet. This was on purpose.

Yes, he would.

CLARK: Can I use the excuse that Lois makes me tongue tied?

EW: I fixed it, Clark. Relax.

CLARK: Phew.

I must have changed antecedents at some point. I thank you, and my future G.E. thanks you.

Ooops, another typo I didn't catch after transcribing. If I get interrupted while typing (which strangely enough happens A LOT with two small children in the house), this is the type of typo that occurs. Thanks for catching it.

If you keep this up, you might get an honorary Beta title.