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Cute!
Awww. What a sweet ending to a fun piece.

And I'll definitely second the sentiment about parenting being the toughest challenge. For me, at least, it is by *far* the hardest (and the most rewarding) thing I have ever done in my life, or am ever likely to do.

Joy,
Lynn
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Originally posted by Laurach:
Cute!
Thank you! smile
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Originally posted by Lynn S. M.:
Awww. What a sweet ending to a fun piece.

And I'll definitely second the sentiment about parenting being the toughest challenge. For me, at least, it is by *far* the hardest (and the most rewarding) thing I have ever done in my life, or am ever likely to do.

Joy,
Lynn
Thanks, Lynn. Hubby and I are hoping to experience the challenge of parenting ourselves, one day.
Very funny and sweet. clap
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Originally posted by KateB:
Very funny and sweet. clap
laugh Thanks, Kate! Glad you enjoyed. I remember what it's like to be a *pre-teen* and staring at Dean's gorgeous body! wink
That was super cute & fun! Love love love!

On a side note, my little sister's name is Rebecca Lynn, and, as the youngest, has been subjected to very similar conversations! Sooo funny!
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Originally posted by MrsLuthor:
That was super cute & fun! Love love love!

On a side note, my little sister's name is Rebecca Lynn, and, as the youngest, has been subjected to very similar conversations! Sooo funny!
Thanks, ML! That's way too funny! I only came up with Rebecca Lynn because I like the first name (hubby won't entertain it for future daughters) and Lynn is my own middle name. wink And yes, she's Lois and Clark's youngest child! laugh
I learned something in this story that I've never seen anywhere before: Clark didn't date Lana for her personality!

Clark doesn't want his little girl to be a growed-up person? I'm surprised! How did it take 16 years for him to meet his first bikini? If there ever was a time when there is a double standard it is with a daughter and a skimpy swim suit. Lois needs to get her turtle necked, knee length swimsuit out and see how Clark appreciates it.

Love it!
Pat
I'm back from a quick business trip and what do I see? Another summertime fic! smile1

So at today at lunch I plan on opening up the website and having a little fun with my salad.

Thanks DC! hyper
Cute story.

It looks like I'm the only one here who thinks Clark should have won this argument. :rolleyes:
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Originally posted by angelsgmaw:
I learned something in this story that I've never seen anywhere before: Clark didn't date Lana for her personality!

Clark doesn't want his little girl to be a growed-up person? I'm surprised! How did it take 16 years for him to meet his first bikini? If there ever was a time when there is a double standard it is with a daughter and a skimpy swim suit. Lois needs to get her turtle necked, knee length swimsuit out and see how Clark appreciates it.

Love it!
Pat
rotflol Pat! But, Clark doesn't have a problem with being able to sexualize his wife! wink And yes, he *is* just a man when it comes to the ladies. But geez, Lana must have looked *amazing* in that swimsuit for him to date her! wink

As for meeting the bikini, maybe this was the first time he wasn't off doing a rescue when she tried to slip out of the house in one? laugh
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Originally posted by Morgana:
I'm back from a quick business trip and what do I see? Another summertime fic! smile1

So at today at lunch I plan on opening up the website and having a little fun with my salad.

Thanks DC! hyper
Anytime, Morgana! laugh
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Originally posted by Vicki:
Cute story.

It looks like I'm the only one here who thinks Clark should have won this argument. :rolleyes:
Thanks, Vicki. Clark's trying to keep his baby girl a baby forever. laugh
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The Red Bikini
Hmm…Lois is going to wear a red bikini and Clark’s going to be all hot and bothered?

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"No. No, no, no. Not in a million years."
Clark’s not happy about Lois going out in public like that?

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On the other couch Lois sat, her arms crossed before her chest.

"Now, Clark," she started.
Sounds like it.

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"It's just a bathing suit," Lois tried to reason with him.
Yep.

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"It's barely big enough to be a handkerchief!" Clark said, shaking his head.
hyper Little Kara-El is adorable!

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"I've been a sixteen year old boy, Lois. I know what sort of thoughts run through their heads."
All true. But still. She’s a Krytponian girl raised on Earth. He won’t need to worry about her getting into too much mischief.

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Seeing my friends...my girl friends...in skimpy bathing suits. Why do you think I ever dated Lana? Her winning personality? No, I saw her in this tight little yellow bathing suit and...well....the rest is history."
Is that a crossover from Corn on a Cob?

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"So you think...what, exactly? That our daughter is going to wind up dating one of her friends, someone who isn't good for her, because of how she's dressed?"
Duh!

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They'll be sexualizing Becca in their heads. I may be from Krypton, but even I had those passing thoughts when I was sixteen."
What’s he going to do when she heads out for spring break in a couple of years?

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Lois' face hardened. "So you think she'll do something stupid?"
/points to above notice on her physical condition/

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"It's just...seeing her in that red bikini...it just reminds me of how grown up she's getting."
It could be worse: She could be wearing one with blue and gold mixed into it. And an S-shield or two.

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"More alone time for the two of us," she whispered seductively in his ear.
wave Michael
clap Very cute! I liked this a lot. Well done!
Super-villians. Deadlines. Time Travel. But nothing drives a loving parent (superhero or not) crazier then a teen-ager pushing for her independence.

Oh Vicki, you are not the only one on Clark's side. He should hold his daughter back from growing up, but slowing down the ride just a little bit is wisdom. Lois, sorry on this one you are WRONG.

Why do I say that? I have brothers... enough said.

Brilliantly done DC.

Can hardly wait for your next offering! wave
Well done Vicki!

It recalled to my memory similar conflicts we had with our daughter.

All too accurately portrayed in your piece.
This is a really cute story. And it so reminds me of my parenting days.
Well done!
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Artemis
Hi, Michael! :wave


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Hmm…Lois is going to wear a red bikini and Clark’s going to be all hot and bothered?
Well, a bikini does *bother* him.

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Clark’s not happy about Lois going out in public like that?
Only he's allowed to see Lois like that?

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Sounds like it.
I *love* throwing people off.

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Oh. Okay. Yes. That’s not acceptable.
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‘a concubine’?
clap And just think, by that time, Ultra Woman stuff would be considered "retro."

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Little Kara-El is adorable!
Well, Marla-El, but thanks! laugh

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All true. But still. She’s a Krytponian girl raised on Earth. He won’t need to worry about her getting into too much mischief.
Or does he? With her powers and all, mischief made could be 1,000 times worse!

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Is that a crossover from Corn on a Cob?
Huh, look at that. Nope, I can honestly say that didn't cross my mind when I was writing this.

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What’s he going to do when she heads out for spring break in a couple of years?
Stalk...er...spy...er...watch...er...guard...from a distance?

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/points to above notice on her physical condition/
<is pretty sure the boys are noticing her ah, *physical* condition too>

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It could be worse: She could be wearing one with blue and gold mixed into it. And an S-shield or two.
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Well, there’s no smoke detector going off, so I’m guessing she has.
It's good that she's not flying yet, so she can't sneak out. wink

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What an adorable vignette, Vicki!
Thank you, Michael!
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Originally posted by Mouserocks:
clap Very cute! I liked this a lot. Well done!
Thanks, Mouse! Glad you enjoyed it! I had fun writing it.
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Originally posted by Morgana:
Super-villians. Deadlines. Time Travel. But nothing drives a loving parent (superhero or not) crazier then a teen-ager pushing for her independence.

Oh Vicki, you are not the only one on Clark's side. He should hold his daughter back from growing up, but slowing down the ride just a little bit is wisdom. Lois, sorry on this one you are WRONG.

Why do I say that? I have brothers... enough said.

Brilliantly done DC.

Can hardly wait for your next offering! wave
Thanks, Morgana. I have to say that I side with both Lois and Clark on this. It's good to slow down the ride, but they should trust her (so long as she's given them a *reason* to trust her). Clark's just bing a *tad* overprotective.

Next one should be coming sometime next month, I hope. I'm polishing and getting it beta'd as we speak!
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Originally posted by KenJ:
Well done Vicki!

It recalled to my memory similar conflicts we had with our daughter.

All too accurately portrayed in your piece.
Thanks, Ken. Funny thing is, I don't remember having fights/arguments like this with my folks at that age. I'm just young enough to still remember what my peers were like! laugh
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Originally posted by Artemis:
This is a really cute story. And it so reminds me of my parenting days.
Well done!
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Artemis
Thanks so much, Artemis! Glad to give you a little throw back to those days! laugh
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Only he's allowed to see Lois like that?
If you ask Clark, I'm sure he'll say yes. If you ask Lois, she'll likely pull out the green crystals.

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Or does he? With her powers and all, mischief made could be 1,000 times worse!
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<is pretty sure the boys are noticing her ah, *physical* condition too>
Umm...I'm sure Clark would start dismembering boys if they were already noticing this particular condition. ML put it into A Matter of Destiny. You see, she's invulnerable. And thus, boys might not be physically able to achieve a home-run with her.

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Stalk...er...spy...er...watch...er...guard...from a distance?
National Whisper: Superman seen at spring break wet T-shirt contest.

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It's good that she's not flying yet, so she can't sneak out.
That's what steel bars on the windows are for?

wave Michael
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If you ask Clark, I'm sure he'll say yes. If you ask Lois, she'll likely pull out the green crystals.
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Umm...I'm sure Clark would start dismembering boys if they were already noticing this particular condition. ML put it into A Matter of Destiny. You see, she's invulnerable. And thus, boys might not be physically able to achieve a home-run with her.
Half the 16 year olds I see act/dress/are developed enough to look like they are 20. wink But watching Clark dismember the boys could be fun. Also, eek at home-runness.

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National Whisper: Superman seen at spring break wet T-shirt contest.
<spews oolong tea over monitor>

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That's what steel bars on the windows are for?
So, that buys Clark 2.5 seconds of keeping her in?
Hmmm typo. I meant to say, Clark should not hold her back from growing up, just slowing it down a little.

There are plenty of cute one piece bathing suits to wear.

Anyhow, like I wrote before...great job!!!
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So, that buys Clark 2.5 seconds of keeping her in?
If she's willing to do property damage.

wave Michael
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Originally posted by Morgana:
Hmmm typo. I meant to say, Clark should not hold her back from growing up, just slowing it down a little.

There are plenty of cute one piece bathing suits to wear.

Anyhow, like I wrote before...great job!!!
Thanks again, Morgana! wave

Although, I side with Rebecca in this case. I've always despised one piece suits. I feel like I'm wearing wet saran wrap in them. :p
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Originally posted by Darth Michael:
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So, that buys Clark 2.5 seconds of keeping her in?
If she's willing to do property damage.

wave Michael
Angsty teen = yes? laugh
Cute little Gen X story. Yes, I see Clark being the overprotective dad. Hello? He's the overprotective sort, isn't he? I'm guessing, if she wanted to she could speed off in the suit, but Clark would probably notice her going by. You mentioned that she was the youngest daughter, is she the only daughter? Or did he not have this problem with her older sister(s)?

I love that Lois is defending her daughter's choice in clothing (or lack thereof). Nice to see she didn't turn into an Ellen. clap (Not that any of us thought she would).

Fun story. clap
</font><blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><hr /><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Originally posted by VirginiaR:
<strong> Cute little Gen X story. Yes, I see Clark being the overprotective dad. Hello? He's the overprotective sort, isn't he? I'm guessing, if she wanted to she could speed off in the suit, but Clark would probably notice her going by. You mentioned that she was the youngest daughter, is she the only daughter? Or did he not have this problem with her older sister(s)?

I love that Lois is defending her daughter's choice in clothing (or lack thereof). Nice to see she didn't turn into an Ellen. wave Hi, Virginia!

Thanks! Yes, Clark is very overprotective, isn't he? laugh But if Rebecca had sped off, not only would he have seen it, but he probably could have beaten her to her ultimate destination. laugh

In this one, she's the only daughter. I've been sticking with a formula of two boys and a girl for Lois and Clark. I dunno, it just works for me. huh

No, Lois is definitely *not* another Ellen Lane! Yikes! eek
Actually, I think Rebecca realizes the last thing she wants to do is rush out. If she does her father has every reason to bring her back. She may be an angsty teen, but she knows that it is more embarrasing having your father show up and tell you to come home than to miss the party entirely.
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Originally posted by John Lambert:
Actually, I think Rebecca realizes the last thing she wants to do is rush out. If she does her father has every reason to bring her back. She may be an angsty teen, but she knows that it is more embarrasing having your father show up and tell you to come home than to miss the party entirely.
Yeah, that's always possible too. Being a teen is rough. It's got to be even worse when your dad has super powers. And pretty much every teen is embarrassed by their parents even when said parent is NOT hauling them home in front of their friends. laugh
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