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How about them dominoes?

Anything you'd like to note? Comments taken all hours of the day or night.

This part could keep up with the best of slapstick. I could hardly get a breather while reading, I had to laugh that often. Keep it up!

Hi Virginia,

It's Sunday and I just read Part 11 and Part 12.

You know, I love this Cat. May be Clark should choose her...

What a great use of Cat! I love her 'discrediting' Lois - what a riot! Can't wait to read what happens between her and Clark next chapter.

Joan

Just a quick note to tell you I'm still reading, still enjoying. Each chapter brings new surprises, and I very much enjoy seeing if I can catch all the little (and some very BIG!) differences as alt-Clark "re-lives" Clark's life. I also get a kick out of it when you have alt-Clark having an entirely different motive for doing something, yet ending up doing the exact same thing Clark did. Your stories are very imaginative, and quite fun to read.

Lara Joelle Kent: Thank you. I'm glad Cat's assistance with Lois' problem worked. Thanks for checking in. Always great to know others are still out there lurking the background.

Thank you. I've tried to make something different from every scene I've borrowed from canon, which sadly in this first section of story, is quite a few. More and more scenes will be original as more dominoes fall. It's an ebb and flow. They meet with many of the same problems (criminals) but handle them differently.

Hi, Pat!

Um... I don't think HG Wells described it as a piece of cake. HG Wells wanted Clark to try his hand at wooing Lois, realize that this early Lois wasn't interested in his Clark-side and go back to his dimension realizing that he shouldn't go back in time and save his Lois, because he could have just as bad of luck. Then this Lois wouldn't go crazy for thinking she's hearing her Clark's voice and be able to save her own dimension from catastrophe herself (as we witnessed her able to do in countless situations in Another Lois) Personally, HG Wells was underestimating this Clark.

Thanks for the Feedback, Pat. I'm glad I'm still keeping my characters (and my readers) on their toes.

There are *so* many great lines in this chapter! It kept me rolling on the floor laughing throughout.

at Lois' story about dating Clark. Another memory (slightly) comes to the surface. When is she going to realize they're something more than just a runaway imagination?

Thanks, IolantheAlias, your pleasure is my pleasure. Cat is fun to write.

Ah, you recognized that scene from 'Lucky Leon', did you? Two points to Mouse! Lois isn't exactly psychic but she does have a lot of deja vu. It's kind of hard to know you have repressed memories when your life keeps repeating itself, keeps repeating itself, is repeating itself...

Two points! Yes... I'll save those for something later... perhaps they will add up to a spoiler?
It's like Groundhog Day! Except Bill Murray doesn't remember that he repeated the day already... Out of curiosity, will Lois ever remember? Nevermind... you probably won't answer that. Although I wonder, what's my point bank looking like and how much does a spoiler cost?

I thought Bill Murray figured it out towards the end? (It's been a while, great flick though , which I personally think makes them more fun (frustrating) to read. I've been more dilligent ever since about not letting too many spoilers slip through; therefore, the only way to get extra spoilers, besides volunteering to Beta (sorry, all full up at the moment) is to read my WHAM Warning , which reminds me, I've been meaning to update that recently. Thanks.

Ooooh. I know. Maybe you can cash in all your FDK point towards the end of this story and I'll forward you an advance on Part 1 of Book 3... which hasn't been fully written yet (although the basic plot is starting to gel in my head).

I like it!

Thanks, Laura. That was fun.

Caught my FDK up with my reading!

Umm…I don’t think he’d truly want that. He’d never be able to wear The Suit™ again. And even his business suit might be impractical.







She’s making it worse, I think.



But…but she *wants* to unveil that source.

They’re not concern about love. It’s the sex bit that’s problematic.

Yes. But would you rather it reads ‘Female reporter was on top of Superman’ or ‘Lois Lane arrested for soliciting alien’?





Umm…points at the military’s OB/GYN station.

So, they already consummated on the roof, then?

Yep. More sex for her later.

Goooood question. Did Prime Cat know, too.

/cocks eyebrow/ Not in this universe.

/goes back checking/ Huh. I could have sworn someone mentioned her wearing above knee skirts in Season 1. Huh…

I wanted to find the one that spews water, but…

Wow, Claude turned her into a drone. Good for us.

Oh boy.

/goes to see doctor for whiplash/

/imagines Clark standing here with wide eyes and open mouth, frantically wagging index finger/

Yes. He doesn’t want to catch anything. Plus, he doesn’t like to wait in line. He’s more of a ‘counter is closed, please wait a couple of hours’ kind of a guy.

/raises hand/ I can see her helping.



Oooooh!

No, let’s continue it for a bit.

I heard he’s stiff as a board.

Yes, it’s not really called ‘making love’. Plus, Cat should be just about bursting right now.



Lois, nobody ever insinuated that there was any sleeping involved.

/cocks eyebrow/ Only because you didn’t have any red kryptonite.

Michael

Hi Michael: Ooooh. A 3-parter FDK!

Michael

There's always my vacation, which is coming up shortly after the end of this first chocolate bunny ear <<cough, cough>> arc. Around Part 21.

Oh, right. Is Top Copy an LNN show?

Sorry, Michael, I accidently hit "Add reply" instead of clicking inside the box. :rolleyes: I don't know what's up with me today. So, to continue...

Patience grasshopper. All in good time.

Not according to Sue. < 3 minutes

Hmmm. I don't think that's on my Recommended Reading List yet... <<runs off to check>> Nope. <<bats eyelashes at Michael>> Do you have a title?

Michael

Actually, you must have recommended that one before, because it WAS on my list.



Thank you.

Actually, since Clark has not sent Lois on a wild goose chase at the Metropolis Reclamation facility but used Superman to thwart Lois getting a story, he is probably a little closet than the other Clark was at this point.

What he does not realize is that this Lois is exactly, or almost exactly, like the Lois he first met, maybe one Kerth Award behind (I am not even sure of that) but essentially the same person. The difference is that she has not had 2+ years of Clark changing her, seen the fall of Lex Luthor and so much else.

I do hope that this Clark does not have to see Lois engaged to Luthor, but we shall see.

Welcome to my story, John. Interesting theory.

Yes, Clark doesn't know that she's a copy of the woman who made him Superman. I had her only have 2 Kerths awards at this point, because I assumed she must have won one in 1993 as well (clearly off screen), since she had 3 by "Wall of Sound" in 1994.

Time will only tell.

I think you want to say "didn't see me telling". Even if Clark is a bit flustered, he probably would not say see twice.

Thanks, John. Fixed.