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Thanks,

Corrina.

poor clark, he needs to man up and put Lana in her place

can't wait to see what will happen next

great job!

That man has GOT to develop a backbone.

It is completely understandable Clark is hestitating to hurt Mayson's feelings. Lana on the other hand is another kettle of fish.

I did not think you could write anything to top Trusting Me, Trusting You, but here it is.

Chapter Two please.

Oh boy, someone is in trouble. It's a good thing she's been in Europe while he was in Metropolis, isn't it? *still being hopeful* However, a paternity test might be a problem for Clark. XD

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A new Corrina fic!

Awesome, another Corrina fic! You have made my year!



Cheers
Elizabeth

Yay! You're back!

as for the story - I think I have whiplash! can't wait for Lois to come back!!

G'day everyone

Thanks so much for the FDK.

Mouserocks I loved all your possibilities for how Clark could be Accused. I also thought it was interesting that you assumed Clark was going to be the one facing the music! (That was merely a comment, not meant in any way to hint at what might be coming )

Seme True, but Clark Kent finds it difficult to man up against pregnant women.

Morgana Glad you're enjoying it, Morgana. As for Clark and a backbone, we'll see.

LJK Two very good points (neither of which necessarily have anything to do with this fic.) First, Lana being in Europe while Clark is in Metropolis doesn't necessarily disallow paternity considering CK=S. And secondly, there are some procedures (such as a paternity test) that Clark would very definitely want to avoid.

Pat

You fastened your seat belt? LOL.

In Clark's defence, he *did* tell Lois he loved her a couple of months ago. She responded by almost marrying Luthor. Now, he's trying really hard to be a 'friend'.

Sydney about the cliffhanger. When I first wrote this, that bit was halfway through the first chapter. But then, the first chapter got waaaay too big, so I had to look for somewhere to put a chapter break.

Elizabeth Hi from across the ditch!

You made one comment that had me Not because of what you said but because it is so given what is coming.

As for a posting schedule - the fic is written, although Part 15 is still very undeveloped. I'm doing another read through, hoping I'll get some inspiration for 15. However, when I re-read 2, I realised a scene was missing, so I added it in, and now it's really big. I looked for somewhere to split it, but there's nowhere. So, even if you have to wait a couple of days for 2, at least when you get it, the story should move along quite nicely.

Sarah Whiplash? I'm not sure if I should laugh or apologise. Lois entering this situation could be interesting.

Thanks to everyone for reading and commenting.

Corrina.

Clark is such a door-mat when it comes to Lana... Please, when he was a boy it was understandable that he would be in awe of her and bow to all her wishes, putting up with her petulance. After all, he was a farm boy that knew nothing about life and didn't know what to do of his strange abilities, with no friends besides her. But now he is a (super) man and a well known reporter that traveled the world. He has a life, friends and a job. It's ridiculous that he keeps on being tongue-tied around her and allowing her to take over his life.

The same with Mayson... He has to be honest and tell her that he is not interested. It's not fair to lead her on while while he's in love with Lois. Being rejected hurt, but would he like it if Lois had accepted his declaration of love and kept on mooning over Superman? Even being Superman he was never comfortable with her adoration of his alter ego. What he is doing with Mayson is worse, because he's in love with another (real) woman, not an alter ego.

Be a man, Clark! Honor your tights... er... pants.

/me waiting a new part: Impatient? Who?

Andreia

Corrina!!!

I certainly echo everyone else's request for Clark to stand up for himself, but we already have seen Alt-Clark let Lana push him around, and our Clark never could bring himself to tell Mayson to her face he wasn't interested. Didn't Lois call him once a "doormat for women"?

On the other hand, one of the things that I found so attractive about Clark was how he wasn't afraid to stand up to Lois.

Corrina!

That was Michael

I need to know your posting schedule! Because this one promises to be a bumpy ride and my seat belt is at the cleaners!

No, really, that cliffie was most unexpected. I wonder if Lana is really pregnant or if she just came up with that to try to scare Mayson away. If so, did it work? And how will Lois react when she hears this "news?" Who will tell her, Clark or Mayson or (shudder) Lana?

Hmm. Clark has two obsessive women chasing him, one whose head is not screwed on tightly enough. It's bad enough that Mayson is willing to slip in close to him and all but knock him to the floor, but now that nutjob Lana is here there's no telling where he'll end up.

So, next part yet?

Corrina,

Another amazing fic and off to a great start.

This looks like it is shaping up to being a four sided triangle, in the metaphorical sense.

I wonder where Lois has been for a week.

Clark does meet to stop being Lana's doormat. He also needs to be honest with Mayson.

Hi again, Corrina!
Let’s see about that FDK

I have no idea what to think of that title. So many possibilities.

She’s cruising the Bermudas?



He’s adorable!

Huh.



Isn’t he tad late for that?

Like that’s not going to backfire. But he could tell Lois that he only courted Mayson because he felt guilty for preferring Lois.

Oh dear. She *is* rather speedy.

I’ll say. All that shaving her legs had been for nothing.



Oh boy.

Oh boy. Oh boy. And considering, his dear neighbor probably is not too sure about his monogamist ways.

Oh boy. /flashes back to own story where Mayson was in Clark’s apartment and how that turned out/ At least, Lois is not yet in town, or is she?



That’s odd.

More than odd.



Eeeehhhh…

Oh boy.

It’s not the hair color, Lana.

See, Clark really did invite her to visit him.

Oh boy. Oh boy.

Aaaaand?

He should.

Oh boy. Oh boy.

Michael

LOL, I can see why now! LOL LOL

More feedback! Thanks!

UW Impatient, hey? I'll get the parts to you as soon as I'm happy with them.

Vicki It's *so* good to hear from you, Vicki.

Interesting thoughts about Clark. Perhaps he was flirting with Lois.

Terry Interesting question about whether Lana is really pregnant. I knew the answer, but it took awhile to decide how to tell the readers.

How long until your seat belt gets back from the cleaners?

Ken A four-sided triangle? As I read some of the FDK, I realised there are quite a few ways I could have taken this. Uhhmmm. Maybe I could fit a four-sided triangle into another fic, cause it's not going to fit here.

Michael How wonderful to be receiving your FDK again - it's always very entertaining.

That could be an interesting conversation!

Poor Clark.

You mentioned so many 'oh boys', we might have to ration you for the rest of the story.

Elizabeth You said Lana was going to get rid of Mayson - well, *someone* got rid of her, but I don't think that was quite what you had in mind. I enjoyed the comment, though.

Thanks to everyone for the comments.

Corrina.

Oh my. Lana does need some psychological help.

I wonder whether she knows Clark's secret and therefore knows that he can not demand, or even acquiesce to, a paternity test?

An intriguing start to the story.

Joy,
Lynn

Thanks! And you're welcome

Oh dear. And I only picked up the habit after reading Nan's Supercop. Plus, I only used a dozen or so. Are you saying I'm only allotted ave a gross for the entire story? Shouldn't there be extenuating circumstances with your story?

Michael

Oooh, new Female Hawk fic! (Yes, I know I'm a little late to the party.)


So, she took a leave of absence to get over the whole near-wedding thing. Okay...I would be attempted to think that she threw herself into her work instead, since that's always been her coping mechanism. But I guess, after Clark's confession of love, and subsequent denial...yeah.

Please ignore my previous comments.

I just really like this trio of sentences here.

Oh Clark, you're too cute for your own good.

But...friends can miss each other and just call to say "Hi, how are you."

*raises hand* Um, I'm worried now.

Awwww.

<throws up a little>

Love this!

Blech!!! (Can you tell that I HATE Mayson?)

She never did take rejection well...

See? The woman is denser than Clark's molecules!

*sigh* We've all been there too, haven't we? Sucks.

Um, no Clark. Grow a backbone. Just say no.

Oh NO! Mayson broke into his apartment?!?!

So true.

<vomits explosively>

Hmmm....what's she up to? Nothing good is my guess.



Good thing he's got a secret closet!

Bad Jonathan! Bad Martha!

Please, Clark, grow a backbone....

<tries to resist urge to punch Lana>



And you're overbearing. And a witch. And annoying. And not Lois. And...



Erm....yep.

Sorry, Clark. Gotta agree with Lana there.

Yes?

<bites nails>



<throws up violently>

Okay, I *know* it can't be his but EWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

Damn, gotta go out. Will have to get to the other chapters later.

Lynn One of the wonderful things about FDK is readers raising points I hadn't thought of - I tend to have very narrow vision about my plots.

If Lana does know CK=S, he is the *perfect* target for her scheme.

Michael

I was thinking about how there's a graemlin-per-post limit and how if there was an 'oh boy' limit, you had given it a shake. You give such wonderful FDK, I'm sure all writers would vote to allow you to use as many 'oh boys' and 'oh dears' as you feel is necessary.

DC You're not late to the party, Vicki, it's only just begun

I hope this isn't too much of a spoiler, but Mayson's part in this is ... quite passive.

Thanks for the comments.

Corrina.

Hmm...sounds interesting. Although, I'd take Mayson over "Please, call me Daniel" Scardino any day of the week!